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Here is one of my songs. Rough demo: My voice + ukulele http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13511284KICK YOU OUT ____________________________________________________ © Words and music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2016. All rights reserved by Guy E. Trépanier.
Intro: 8 bars (key of D)
You don't wanna sway with me Don't treat me like a flea If you go away from me I won't call you for a tea
I, I'm gonna kick you out Kick you out of my life I, I'm gonna kick you out Kick you out of my life
If you wanna chat with me Don't be rough or unfair 'cause if you do that to me I'll put you right off the air
I, I'm gonna kick you out Kick you out of my life I, I'm gonna kick you out Kick you out of my life
Instrumental: 8 bars
I don't wanna fool around Better stay close to you I hope we can get along One plus one does equal two
I don't wanna kick you out Kick you out of my life I don't wanna kick you out Kick you out of my life
I don't wanna kick you out Kick you out of my life I don't wanna kick you out Kick you out of my life
Kick you out of my life .... .... .... ....
Guy E. Trépanier #286 Melody: july 2016. Lyrics: july 2016.
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Hi Guy, I enjoyed this very much. You are definitely having fun and it shows. Mike
Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 10/13/19 04:24 PM.
Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice Fortune depends on the tone of your voice
-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon) from the song "Songs of Love" from the album "Casanova" (1996)
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Hi Guy:
You indicated it is a "rough demo" and... that being said... the possibilities for a full production demo are certainly there. I agree with Mike... it is intended to be a fun song (from my limited perspective) and that should make it sell well in today's market. Best of luck with it. Keep us posted when convenient.
All the best, ----Dave
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