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Sky and Sea by Tammy Jann © 2019
The sky was painted blue set in the perfect scene then someone smudged the colors and it bled into the sea
The sea was colored green now infused with sky's blues so much color, it overflowed drowning sand and rocks too
Sky and sea are blended the scene won't be the same the beauty was diluted someone mixed it with their pain
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some of the best reads I`ve come across is these little poetic pieces, nice work. Tam
"Blessed are the words of truth and fiction, one might save you from the other...Vincent
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The sky was painted blue and scarlet touched the trees then someone smudged the colors and it bled into the sea The sea swirled with green the sky dripping poison so much color, it overflowed like fire on the horizon The sky and sea ablaze the scene won't be the same the beauty was diluted someone mixed it with their pain Just a thought...
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Well done, reads like a song possibility.
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Lane, I enjoy sharing my little poetic pieces with you. Thank you so much for giving it a go...
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JAPOV,
I appreciate your view and take on the write, but I don't plan on changing it, but you have good ideas. Thanks for your time.
Tammy
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Mr. maccharles as I live and breathe..........just seeing you and hearing form you again is a dream...... I admit to you friend that I stop and wonder often if I am a poet or just have a knack for writing short songs LOL!! What say you? LOL! thrilled to see you again.......
Tammy
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