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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Days are precious few Verse Where do they go, days of new Now they’re precious few. Times too short, it’s much too short For us to argue. Chorus We’ve lived, we’ve loved a long, long time. We’ve shared what we’ve been thru. No time to fight about who’s right Our days are precious few. Verse Let’s start out with forgiveness. We can call a truce. Screw the petty arguments. We have things to do. Chorus We’ve lived, we’ve loved a long, long time. We’ve shared what we’ve been thru. No time to fight about who’s right Our days are precious few. Verse We’ve never been to Venice. We’ve never been to Rome. Haven’t been five hundred miles Away from our home. Chorus We’ve lived, we’ve loved a long, long time. We’ve shared what we’ve been thru. No time to fight about who’s right Our days are precious few. Verse We haven’t gone skydiving. We’ve never booked a cruise. So many dreams left sleeping Still need to come true. Bridge There’s been too much good to waste. There’s still more to come. Though days are precious few now They’re still far from done.
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This is like two songs in one. The first two verses are more in the psychological voice and the second two verses are more in the real world voice and do not relate, in my mind, to the line in the chorus "No time to fight about who's right". I'd , at least switch their order, because the psychological carries more weight with the audience, to me. But, if you could think about rewriting it, I'd make all in one consistent voice.
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