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Landing
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/06/23 04:48 PM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/06/23 11:20 AM
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"Dwell"
by bennash - 12/06/23 09:55 AM
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4 Artists
by Guy E. Trepanier - 12/03/23 07:19 PM
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Snuts
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/03/23 05:01 AM
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I first demoed this in July, but after living with it for several months I made a few lyric changes to hopefully make the song stronger. We re-tracked the vocal last week and this is the result. Thanks for listening everyone! Marvin https://soundcloud.com/marvinadcock/broken-glass
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Hi Marvin:
I remember your original version but have no "plain of reference" to compare your lyric changes. Knowing the fantastic writer you are... I'll take your word that you improved it. It is a wonderful song about a terrible malady impacting so many families here and probably around the world. (I'd love to see statistics about how the percentages of Alzheimers impacts different countries or regions.)
Your vocalist did a great job and I believe the song can provide comfort to so many people suffering from the effects of this disease. Thanks for sharing it with us and best of luck in getting it boosted up the ladder of success. ----Dave
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It's a beautiful lyric about a very difficult subject. I particularly like:
"She’s the stranger in the mirror
Who combs his hair and helps him dress"
Those lines really hit you in the gut.
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nice work, I think the writing is very well done and I love the melody in this, and the story line.
really a super listen, thanks for sharing. Lane
"Blessed are the words of truth and fiction,
one might save you from the other...Vincent
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One of the Best Songs I've heard in awhile.
Who is singing?
Great Stuff....
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Thank you Dave, Gavin, Lane and Barry for listening and commenting. I appreciate your feedback very much. Barry the vocalist is Brent Rader. We have been working together for several years on my demos.
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Marvin,
I usually always enjoy your art--beautiful!
steady-eddie
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Thanks Eddie for listening. I hope you are doing well pal.
Best,
Marvin
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Sad and scary, Marvin. Well done!
Ricki
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Thanks Ricki, and yes it is heartbreaking for families who go through it. Thanks for listening and commenting.
Marvin
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MARVIN! What a powerful song. Had me from the beginning to the end. Very! Very! Well done! Wow!
Douglas
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Thanks Douglas for the kind words. I believe it to be the strongest song I have ever written. Thanks for listening!
Marvin
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