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I Believe In You
I walk the straight and narrow,most all the time But i venture into darkness,when i go blind Between the good and evil,i live my ways And i know what's right and wrong,but hear me when i say
No matter what i do,i believe in you Though i'm feeling untrue,i believe in you Then you turn my skies to blue,when i'm lost without a clue Because i believe in you,i believe in you
Sometimes my blood runs cold,and i don't give a damn But there's a rainbow on the edge,of this barren land And through this lonely darkness,a light shines down on me I hold my hands up to the sky,and sing to the powers that be
No matter what i do,i believe in you Though i'm feeling untrue,i believe in you Then you turn my skies to blue,when i'm lost without a clue Because i believe in you,i believe in you
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Hi Michael,
Very nice ... I really like the bittersweet flavor in this!
Lisa
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I like this one Mike but I think you might have too many ooo sounds in the chorus back to back. I like repetition but this might sound over the top when you sing it.
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thanks for stopping by Colin.Yes,i'll have to agree on you there with that chorus.After reading it a few times,it seems too much of the same.A simple fix for sure. Mike
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