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#1102804 - 03/18/16 04:29 PM The End of Any Road  
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Hey guys,
This is a little one about my sister. Really not sure if I like it, so would definitely appreciate some feedback smile

The End of Any Road

lyrics:
You that I can picture in my mind
Who has come so far with me
Through it all
You that share with me my own eyes
You wear them better than I do
With your smile

And I know this world can be crazy at times
Some will come, and some will go
But believe you me I'll be at the end of any road
Any road, you choose to go

You who can cast shadows with your own light
But who will still
Choose the dark
You whose paint reflects your own mind
You who lives inside
Your art

And I know this world can be crazy at times
Some will come, and some will go
But believe you me I'll be at the end of any road
Any road, you choose to go


#1102807 - 03/18/16 04:59 PM Re: The End of Any Road [Re: NicholasSpoonerRodie]  
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i like this a lot Nicholas,it makes want to know your sister more.Mike

#1102810 - 03/18/16 05:29 PM Re: The End of Any Road [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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Thanks Mike , appreciate the listen !

#1102811 - 03/18/16 05:45 PM Re: The End of Any Road [Re: NicholasSpoonerRodie]  
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i mean in,what's her story,not in a creepy way,lol.Mike

#1102816 - 03/18/16 07:37 PM Re: The End of Any Road [Re: Michael LeBlanc]  
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hahaha, don't worry, I understand!

#1102845 - 03/19/16 04:32 AM Re: The End of Any Road [Re: NicholasSpoonerRodie]  
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Hi Nicholas,

Another beautiful song, from start to finish, both words and music.

What's not to like? The music is every bit as warm as "I'll be at the end of any road/Any road, you choose to go" and the two (music & lyrics) fit perfectly.

Once again, I find your music very moving. I'm a fan, for sure. smile

Mike

Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 03/19/16 04:33 AM.

Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)
#1102853 - 03/19/16 11:15 AM Re: The End of Any Road [Re: Michael Zaneski]  
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Pleasant melody and sentiment.

Could be said that it requires an explanation to fully understand.

#1102855 - 03/19/16 12:03 PM Re: The End of Any Road [Re: Sunset Poet]  
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Hi Nick:

Forgive me if I "take liberties" with your name... but I'm with Martin on this one. I read the lyric first and immediately wanted to hear it.

After hearing it... let me say you have an interesting vocal style but if I had not read the words... I would have been as lost as Mary's Little Lamb. It is also a short song (time-wise) and that's not a bad thing in today's market. Short songs are today's "little black dress."

The volume builds as the song progresses but I would advise a re-take with more backing. Loved the story and this one is too good to leave "as-is!"

I hope you understand my comments are intended to provide feedback and not a negative, self-serving critique.

Best of luck with it. ----Dave

#1102900 - 03/20/16 03:42 AM Re: The End of Any Road [Re: Michael Zaneski]  
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Thank you Mike, always appreciate the listen smile

#1102901 - 03/20/16 03:43 AM Re: The End of Any Road [Re: Sunset Poet]  
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Thank you Martin appreciate the listen !

#1102902 - 03/20/16 03:47 AM Re: The End of Any Road [Re: Dave Rice (D)]  
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Thank you Dave, I appreciate the feedback! Will definitely take into consideration when I come back to this one.

#1102905 - 03/20/16 08:18 AM Re: The End of Any Road [Re: NicholasSpoonerRodie]  
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Hi Nicholas,

NICE SONG with a pleasant feel to it.
I wanted to hear your vocals LOUDER.....

Thanks for sharing what you do.

Calvin


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart

#1102929 - 03/20/16 02:14 PM Re: The End of Any Road [Re: Calvin]  
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Thank you Calvin, I'm recording the vocals separately on the next one so should be able able to raise them significantly.

#1103865 - 04/02/16 12:40 PM Re: The End of Any Road [Re: NicholasSpoonerRodie]  
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Sweet, Nicholas. You have a great style, your melodies are ethereal and your lyrics beautifully poetic. That said, I was hoping for something different musically in the chorus instead of a repeat of the verse music, especially when I know you can do it. Just a thought.

Ricki

#1103894 - 04/02/16 05:37 PM Re: The End of Any Road [Re: Ricki E. Bellos]  
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Thanks for the listen and thoughts Ricki! smile


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