Alright Calvin,i'm really likin' what ya done with this!The change you made in the chorus is fantastic too.The guitar fits this nice and your vocals is right on!Thanx for taking this lyric and Calvinizing it!And yep,i'm feelin' much better,thanx.Mike
IF the picture works, here is my little dog Gracie
OH come on now..everyone hating on little dogs..I have a precious little dog..though she does not have diamond collars...lol..
this is cute and I have seen the kind you speak of...they live better than I do...but not all little dogs are created equal...
I know you're picking..had to pick back at ya
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I was really laughing out loud--very entertaining. Loved the automated panning of the acoustic guitar during the chorus--super cool effect! I'm not sure you need the comedic ending, I think it might be cool and create more of a long lasting humor by ending with the idea that this guy is obsessively envious of the pooch and hates the old rich bag--it's his life! Enjoyed this one.
thanx Iggy,i see a lot of these dogs in the park where i work,i don't think some of them know that they are a dog.Well i don't think i have a song with la la's in it until now,i'm glad Calvin found a place for them.Thanx for the spin and comments,Mike