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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Here is the lyric to a tune my buddy Sonny and I wrote last fall. It has an up tempo bluegrass feel to it.
I HATE THE WAY I LOVE IT Sonny King/Fred Choate 2013
CHORUS: I’m falling I’m falling with every little kiss I’m falling I’m falling didn’t think it’d be like this I’m falling I’m falling more in love with you I hate the way I love it and I don’t know what to do
VERSE I never thought …there would ever be another one for me A casual look… took me by surprise and my heart missed a beat Now my mind pictures you right next to me
CHORUS I’m falling I’m falling with every little kiss I’m falling I’m falling didn’t think it’d be like this I’m falling I’m falling more in love with you I hate the way I love it and I don’t know what to do
VERSE You called me up…. Friday night was looking good and would I go What the heck…thought I’d check you out and maybe then I’d know Does my mind want my heart to be alone….
CHORUS I’m falling I’m falling with every little kiss I’m falling I’m falling didn’t think it’d be like this I’m falling I’m falling more in love with you I hate the way I love it and I don’t know what to do INSTRUMENTAL BREAK (chorus PROGRESSION)
VERSE We said goodnight… I drove away not knowing what to do What comes next…my racing mind and heart are so confused I might turn around and head on back to you
CHORUS I’m falling I’m falling with every little kiss I’m falling I’m falling didn’t think it’d be like this I’m falling I’m falling more in love with you I hate the way I love it and I don’t know what to do
CHORUS I’m falling I’m falling with every little kiss I’m falling I’m falling didn’t think it’d be like this I’m falling I’m falling more in love with you I hate the way I love it and I don’t know what to do
TAG: I hate the way I love it and I don’t know what to do
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Hi Fred Love bluegrass and this reads like a good bouncy footstomper.Good work! Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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"I hate the way I love it, cause I love the way you do." or ... "I'm lovin' what you do"
Just a thought. My pet peeve is wasted/filler words/lines, especially if they complete your chorus/hook. Yeah, it works as it is but maybe it could be a stronger line to finish your chorus.
Looking forward to this one, Fred. Nice write.
Write on, Man, Michael W. Brown, f.k.a. "bluesriff"
"The best way to find yourself is to lose yourself in the service of others." Mahatma Gandhi
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Good idea Mike. I will run it by Sonny and see what he thinks.
Thanks!
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