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Frank's "tell the truth" song reminded me of this. We have gotten the attention of the drunk folks at the bar with this song. It helps keep from feeling like background noise.It does contain the word a**, so if offended by donkeys, skip over it. Any critiques welcome and appreciated.

Chad Lewis
Butterfly Tattoo

Chor.
Bright blue, butterfly tattoo
Sittin’ right above her a**
Some people call it a tramp stamp
I say it’s just a little…touch of class
V. I
Don’t want no little skinny gal
Who always talks real fine
Like a big old country girl
With a couple of hills to climb

When she shakes that thing
With just a little sass
I can see that tattoo wiggle
Right above her a**
It’s a…
Rpt. Chor.

Like to see her
Purse those bright red lips
Like to see her
Shake those big ol’ hips

Yeah, they say she’s a redneck
Just a little white trash
She’s my gal from Oklahoma
With a tattoo on her back
It’s a…
Rpt. Chor.
Saturday night
Out on the floor
Way she shakes that thing
Got me comin’ back for more

Like to see her
Wear those jeans real tight
Like to see those hips
Shakin’ from side to side
Br.
When she has a drink or two
I know we’ll have a blast
I’m gonna see that tattoo shakin’
Right above her a**
It’s a…
Rpt Chor.

I imagine with a couple drinks in me, I'd enjoy this more, Bro Chad.

But...somehow the A-word comes across as a tad Crass.

Guess it all depends on the Crowd... (& The Gal..& the Tattoo, eh?) ;-)>

I'm NOT at all offended...(Hell..I Appreciate a Great Hiney with the Best of 'Em!)

Good Luck with it, Amigo,
Stan

Hey Chad
I think it's a fine write. I didn't think the word was even considered rude these days, It's used all the time on tv and is a part of everyday language. Anyway Good job.

Take it easy
Joe

appreciate the comments, guys. I do only play it at sister's bar, which is not the most esteemed establishment. Would not play it at a sockhop!

I like it, it is straight to the point and well written. Nice work Chad.

Rude! Not any more Chad lol Great story and some really good lines"A couple of hills to climb"
Yes a good bar number to get them all dancing and cheering, a bit of fun, we need it nowadays too!
Travis

Thanks a bunch to you guys for looking. It really wasn't meant to be rude. A friend (great singer) asked me to write a song about a tramp stamp. Said it had to be a butterfly tattoo. So I wrote this as something that I could see Jerry Jeff Walker sing. I meant for it to be light-hearted and fun.