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The melody and more so the phrasing was good. The background vocal was part of the final record. This song which was written by three of us, the producer,the singer and myself was the flip side of a hit song. Unfortunately it was passed the days of 45's so I made no money

Your approach was the most contemporary, you said you didn't put a lot of thought into the lyrics, hello contemporary lol
But that's that's the right approach you don't want to hear a track like this and think about the words, you just want to re-act to the trac and the lyric in a playful way. Sex, street talk, youthful things and some uniqueness with lines and ideas.