Hi smile

Thanks for joining in... Actually the lyric only is fine the music is what your heard, done already and singing & melody is but an option.

The lyric you have are well crafted and have some "tasty" words.
LOts are workable some a little more so on the side of poetry then pop of this genre. Ambrosia & nectar of our love, Take me into your night"...

You did a good job rhythm wise it lays out easy to sing in my head...

This was a strong one

My body throbs
I can't get enough
My lips quiver
For taste of your love
Warm moist sweat
The touch of your tease
Tender kisses
Wet and heated

Thanks again


Peace Mike

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