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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/27/23 03:35 PM
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Dirts
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/27/23 08:37 AM
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Soundbank
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/24/23 06:36 PM
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Hi  Thanks for joining in... Actually the lyric only is fine the music is what your heard, done already and singing & melody is but an option. The lyric you have are well crafted and have some "tasty" words. LOts are workable some a little more so on the side of poetry then pop of this genre. Ambrosia & nectar of our love, Take me into your night"... You did a good job rhythm wise it lays out easy to sing in my head... This was a strong one My body throbs I can't get enough My lips quiver For taste of your love Warm moist sweat The touch of your tease Tender kisses Wet and heated Thanks again Mike
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