Kim


Thanks for your comment, I am a fan of your writing, so I really appreciate the compliment.

I just cant hear the right melody for it myself, everything I have tried sounds tired, I think maybe production behind the melody is what will sell the lyric. Hopefully it will come to me or I can collab with someone on the music for now even though I wrote I like the poem


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