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The thing that makes this tune really strong for me is the wordplay in the chorus. Great job Don.
Brina's writing skills are really improving.
The tune overall is strong as is. Nevertheless, I'm not sure all that great wordplay in the chorus is played for its maximum effect. Specifically, the phrase "but I can't say when" kinda gets hurried thru.
It's definately not bad... but like I said, just something to maybe consider.
Peace,
Ian
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