Hey ThinMan,
Nice to meet you via this board. New poster here. Interesting to hear someone saying "fixin' to" in the UK. Thought that was a Southern thing here.

Loved the lyrics. Some very nice imagery there. And some truth, also. Also like your spare and rythmic use of guitar. I tend to overstrum my way through a song. The mark of a beginner, I guess. I must say, though, for me there was a disconnect between the lyrics and the feel of the song. It almost sounded cheerful. Maybe you were going for a cavalier delivery of all the doom and gloom. Or maybe I didn't get it. Anyway, enjoyed listening to you. Well done.

Feel free to listen to my song Destiny and give me some honest feedback.


Talking about music is like dancing about architechture-Steve Martin