Interesting, I have a bridge i can use for this, but the way its presented here. This is plenty, if i take that key change at very end, music for 8 bars or so, and then just repeat pre chorus snd chorus againn, a bridge wouldn't be needed.

I think this teaches us that songs are produced more than they are written.

I think this is a hit

https://www.udio.com/songs/iv1zZ6Gke332KCEkHT7b5K

it's happening again, im lyin awake
Thinkin bout you has been a costly mistake
Cause I cant fall asleep

when all of the while
you're wishin me dead
I kicked you out
of my big stupid head
now, I know talk is cheap...but

I don't wanna dream anything else
Thought i needed more
Been lyin to myself
I saw it written in a meme ,
there's no I in team
there's no I in team

The twelve hour grind
a beer for the stress
a clip of the news
then sleep for sucess
Then push through the day

Im sorry if ive
Forgotten to dance
I cant get the win
Without youu there's no chance
Now, ive found new nerve to say

I don't wanna dream anything else
Thought i needed more
Been lyin to myself
I saw it written in a meme ,
there's no I in team
there's no I in team

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