Got that awesome JAPOV sound going again. I would never have imagined the lyric with a musical treatment like this, but it works particularly well in the chorus, which I really like. I'm glad you started with it because it means we get to hear it once more than we might otherwise have done. Musically, I'm slightly less of a fan of the verse. After the first four lines, I don't really want to hear the exact same again. How about adding some background vocals there to switch it up a gear. Even just some oohs or ahs, or a choir effect?

Just a thought. It's pretty darned good as it is.