Hello John,
I like all of it. lyric. guitar. singing. Seems topical as well...waitng on the world to change....please!
If anything in your delivery, its just a tiny bit ....too happy? maybe...hmmm...more drone effect.....sinking lost buried heavy hand doomed! oh probably thats going overboard to make a point.

But , cool folksong kinda statement w a larger metaphor for these times.