Thank you Emmanuel for taking the time to listen and commenting. From all I hear, it is worthwhile to work on this some and play around with the sound just to see what might be possible.

Thank you too Gary for some in depth lyrical analysis and offering up some suggestions to play with.

I like the idea of the mystery guest so to speak. I is there now only vaguely and I think I could definitely bring someone in to add something...


If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop