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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Joined: Aug 2018
Posts: 165
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Mimmo,
Definitely improved lyrically in my mind, as the story flows and feels more real. I also liked how you tweaked some of the notes being sang. I originally in my earlier comments started to mention the repeat about 2nd chance, but then thought given the nostalgia, I thought it was effective in this circumstance reinforcing that line. I do think from a production polishing, you could remove a little of the upper range eq--a bit to brittle IMO. Check those eq's on their individual faders, or maybe put an eq on the master fader and back off those frequencies--just be careful it doesn't affect your vox too much. I was listening through decent head phones that do boost bass and upper mids slightly for your info.
Great song Mimmo, you have a flare for romance--but being from Italy, that comes natural huh?
steady-eddie Eddy: Thanks for coming back to check it out...I also think the repeat of "second chance " sits nicely in there. I'm still working on the final production. This a temporary mix. Thanks for your comments . Soon I will post a completed track. Regards Mimmo
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