Hi Dave,
I think more songs of this nature should be written. You've allowed your views in without insulting opposing views. I like it. These are hot topics and I think you've touched well on them. Enjoyed it. I do think the bridge is a bit long. As for the musical parts, I'll leave that to the experts. Enjoyed it.


Caroline


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