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Tricia Baker
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posted 12-10-2004 16:19     Click Here to See the Profile for Tricia Baker   Click Here to Email Tricia Baker     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Dime Store Christmas
Patricia Baker, BMIÓ2004

She got up at five that morning,
To decorate the Christmas tree.
Said she was going out shopping,
For my brother, daddy and me.

Crack caused that reindeer caught in,
Santa’s headlight-look in her eyes.
She called from the police station,
So that she could tell us good-bye.

That year we had a dime store Christmas,
In the housing project by the bay.
A little tinsel and some garland,
Sure can go a long, long way.
Singing a few old Christmas carols,
Pretending we could drive the sleigh.
Just us and our dime store Christmas,
That was reason enough to celebrate.

With momma incarcerated,
My daddy fell into the skids.
Christmas can feel pretty lonesome,
When you’re a latch-key kind of kid.

We were always independent,
And, Lord knows we grew up too fast.
All we needed was two parents,
Not ghosts from Christmases past.

Repeat Chorus

Bridge:
Momma was a good woman,
And, Daddy was a good man.
How they let drugs destroy them,
That’s what I don’t understand.

Repeat Chorus

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"Shoot for the moon, and even if you miss, you will land among the stars." -- Les Brown
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triciabakermusic.htm

[This message has been edited by Tricia Baker (edited 12-10-2004).]

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Calvin
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posted 12-10-2004 16:54     Click Here to See the Profile for Calvin   Click Here to Email Calvin     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Hi Tricia,

I like the story but I had trouble singing this part..
For my brother, daddy and me.

and this part...was a mouthful
Crack gave her that reindeer caught in,
Santa’s headlight-look in her eyes.

but then again it could just be me, cause I have trouble singing period.

Calvin

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewartmusic.htm

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Tricia Baker
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posted 12-10-2004 16:57     Click Here to See the Profile for Tricia Baker   Click Here to Email Tricia Baker     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Darn it! I was afraid of that, Calvin. I wrote that entire song around that one phrase. Ha! Isn't that just the way it is, though? Shoot!!!!

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"Shoot for the moon, and even if you miss, you will land among the stars." -- Les Brown
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triciabakermusic.htm

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Calvin
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posted 12-10-2004 17:02     Click Here to See the Profile for Calvin   Click Here to Email Calvin     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
hey.... don't depent on my opinion.
I don't know too much at all.
Maybe it's just right & I'm wrong.

C

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sweetjoyce
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posted 12-10-2004 17:03     Click Here to See the Profile for sweetjoyce   Click Here to Email sweetjoyce     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
fear not Tricia, I can sing anything, albeit terribly lol, but and so....

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Tricia Baker
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posted 12-10-2004 17:03     Click Here to See the Profile for Tricia Baker   Click Here to Email Tricia Baker     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I niggled it a little bit. I'm sure others will tell us whether it'll work or not.

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"Shoot for the moon, and even if you miss, you will land among the stars." -- Les Brown
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triciabakermusic.htm

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Tricia Baker
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posted 12-10-2004 17:05     Click Here to See the Profile for Tricia Baker   Click Here to Email Tricia Baker     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Hi, Ritt. So you're saying your tongue doesn't get twisted when you sing it?

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"Shoot for the moon, and even if you miss, you will land among the stars." -- Les Brown
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triciabakermusic.htm

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John Voorpostel
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posted 12-10-2004 18:11     Click Here to See the Profile for John Voorpostel   Click Here to Email John Voorpostel     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
AAAGHHHH You and I are both thinking "dime store" today Tricia... honest...I didn't know until after I posted this was here


Ans its funny...mine started with "dime store epic"...

Great minds think almost alike

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Tricia Baker
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posted 12-10-2004 23:45     Click Here to See the Profile for Tricia Baker   Click Here to Email Tricia Baker     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Hi, John. I need to see what you've got over there. It's ok. I don't own the rights to "dime store" for sure or even that idea. Thanks for stopping by. It's always nice to see you!

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"Shoot for the moon, and even if you miss, you will land among the stars." -- Les Brown
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triciabakermusic.htm

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Tricia Baker
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posted 12-12-2004 19:51     Click Here to See the Profile for Tricia Baker   Click Here to Email Tricia Baker     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I did a revision of this one today. See what you think if you get a chance.

Dime Store Christmas
Patricia Baker, BMIÓ2004

She got up at five that morning,
To decorate the Christmas tree.
Said she was going out shopping,
For my brother, daddy and me.

Crack gave her that reindeer caught in,
Santa’s headlight-look in her eyes.
She called from the police station,
So that she could tell us good-bye.

That year we had a dime store Christmas,
In the housing project by the bay.
A little tinsel and some garland,
Sure can go a long, long way.
Singing a few old Christmas carols,
Pretending we could drive the sleigh.
Just us and our dime store Christmas,
That was reason enough to celebrate.

Daddy barely coped without Momma,
The devil drug him to the gates of Hell.
Christmas can be so lonesome,
Even when you’re singing Noel.

We were always independent,
And, Lord knows we grew up too fast.
All we needed was two parents,
Not ghosts from Christmases past.

Repeat Chorus

Bridge:
Next year will be different,
She says things’ll be a whole lot better.
She gets out that week, she’ll be home by Christmas Eve.
At least that’s what she says in her letter.

Repeat Chorus

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"Shoot for the moon, and even if you miss, you will land among the stars." -- Les Brown
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triciabakermusic.htm

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