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#975038 - 09/02/12 11:59 PM
Take 4 of vocals only of "Forever Only My Fantasy" glyn
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glynda
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Registered: 07/12/08
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Loc: Princeton Texas
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Ok, told you I'm trying different ways to sing this, then hope to find music..tks glyn
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11869300
Forever …Only My Fantasy
I’ve loved you for some time now
I’m afraid It’s my destiny
To live alone in this world
I thought you were all I’d ever need
But now I realize…..
You’re only My Fantasy
I’ dream of you late at night
Go to sleep with you on my mind
Wake up with thoughts of you
In real life you’ll never be mine
I guess it’s time I face reality
You’re only…My Fantasy
I’d give anything
If I could some day belong to you
But I know , that won’t happen
I fell in love with you
too late in my life
I’ll never be your wife
You’re only… My Fantasy
Sometimes in my head
I think of you here with me
Can see your face so clearly
Sitting here beside me watching TV
When I’ts time to go to bed
Again I realize..you’re Only My Fantasy
What would I have to do
To make my dreams come ture
Is there any chance in this life
For me TO belong to you
I’d be so proud to be your wife
But I know, you’re Only My Fantasy
I wish at times I was brave enough to tell you how I feel, but the fear of being turned down , is something I can’t risk to hear…………
……….so again tonight…
I’d give anything
If I could some day belong to you
But I know , that won’t happen
I fell in love with you
Too late in my life
I’ll NEVER be wife
You’re only My Fantasy
It’s time to set my soul free, and let go of this Fantasy……
FOREVER, MY FANTASY
Forever, Only My Fantasy
Written by glyn
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#975039 - 09/03/12 12:02 AM
Re: Take 4 of vocals only of "Forever Only My Fantasy" glyn
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glynda
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Registered: 07/12/08
Posts: 7970
Loc: Princeton Texas
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I'll still probably redo this at least 50 more times...sorry...but I gotta have something to do to keep me going...thanks for puttin up with me...glyn
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#975201 - 09/04/12 10:37 AM
Re: Take 4 of vocals only of "Forever Only My Fantasy" glyn
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John Hagye
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Registered: 09/02/12
Posts: 26
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Woooooahhhh.. slow it down there honey.. You're rushing to beat the measure, don't compress it to make good time. This is a love song, and we make love slow or fast, but you can't yank around with the speeds unless you want your partner to blow a fuse.. Take it slow, and stretch it out as long as it takes to get your feelings across. and then try the whole thing faster till you find the right groove.. The rhymes will fall in place, if you feel like things are jumbled a bit. trim it up . ... try removing a few peices of sentences with " I's" here and there , it helps. Instead of saying " but i know it will never happen" if you feel like your rushing to make it rhyme try " it might never happen"
I never Pick apart anyones lyrics, It's sacred ground, but i seem to feel a bit different since you are just so awesome. "watching TV".. gotta get rid of that one.. try " so tenderly" or "holding me gently" , Unless it is a personal memory and then I really had no biz speaking up.. sorry if i offend.. I don't want to .. really dig your work glyn.. John.. out.
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#975219 - 09/04/12 11:47 AM
Re: Take 4 of vocals only of "Forever Only My Fantasy" glyn
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glynda
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Registered: 07/12/08
Posts: 7970
Loc: Princeton Texas
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John....hahahaha
I seem to always sing too fast..this one is very still in the beginning stages...and yes, I'm still trimming and will sing it slower....you have some great suggs...and I'll use them...
I'm NOT my singer, I just sing sometimes to show what I'm hearing....thank you so much for your feedback..
glyn
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#975233 - 09/04/12 01:20 PM
Re: Take 4 of vocals only of "Forever Only My Fantasy" glyn
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John Hagye
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Registered: 09/02/12
Posts: 26
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oh god, i was afraid you were going to be mad. I know you are going to make a wonderful song out of this. Your voice is great, you should sing your songs even if you have a demo singer, even if just as a reward to yourself.
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#975255 - 09/04/12 05:12 PM
Re: Take 4 of vocals only of "Forever Only My Fantasy" glyn
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Michael LeBlanc
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Registered: 01/27/05
Posts: 4651
Loc: Louisiana
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with the music,i know this will all fall in place Glynda.Good write and some nice croonin'!Mike
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#975278 - 09/04/12 06:56 PM
Re: Take 4 of vocals only of "Forever Only My Fantasy" glyn
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glynda
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Registered: 07/12/08
Posts: 7970
Loc: Princeton Texas
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Thanks John..,,.naw I never get mad....just EVEN,,,ok I'm just kidding...lol
Hey Mojo, I'm soooo happy you're ok and thanks , yep I'll keep working at this till It's a # 1,....at least at my house...
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#975279 - 09/04/12 07:00 PM
Re: Take 4 of vocals only of "Forever Only My Fantasy" glyn
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glynda
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Registered: 07/12/08
Posts: 7970
Loc: Princeton Texas
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Oh and I've re-practiced this and I've got it a lot slower and It sounds better to me...but still working on it..probably can't do much till I get to Oklahoma....
Edited by glynda (09/04/12 07:00 PM)
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#975409 - 09/05/12 05:16 PM
Re: Take 4 of vocals only of "Forever Only My Fantasy" glyn
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Little_stevie_b
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Registered: 05/18/01
Posts: 4281
Loc: Hickory, North Carolina USA
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Glyn,
You've come a long way in your writing both lyrically and melody wise. I look forward to hearing this with a musical accompaniment.
Stevie
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#975447 - 09/05/12 09:25 PM
Re: Take 4 of vocals only of "Forever Only My Fantasy" glyn
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Nelson
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Registered: 06/12/10
Posts: 1412
Loc: Baltimore, MD
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Wow Glynda
Nice write indeed.
Very emotional story... begging for some music.
I'll be waiting to hear this one... later on down the road.
Feels like a heart breaker already.
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#975485 - 09/05/12 11:31 PM
Re: Take 4 of vocals only of "Forever Only My Fantasy" glyn
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glynda
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Registered: 07/12/08
Posts: 7970
Loc: Princeton Texas
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Little stevie b,
Thank you so much for listening and for the sweet comment...I appreciate it so much
glyn
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#975486 - 09/05/12 11:33 PM
Re: Take 4 of vocals only of "Forever Only My Fantasy" glyn
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glynda
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Registered: 07/12/08
Posts: 7970
Loc: Princeton Texas
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Hello Mister Nelson,
Why thank you sir, you sure do know how to make me blush...yep I'll still be working on this one...still can't get it like I'm hearing it, but I'll keep on it and some music would really make it sound better to me too...
glyn
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