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https://soundcloud.com/arty-redsocks/sepia-worktapeWritten in the female perspective, hoping to send this off to a female performer when completed... SEPIA V1.1 RogersonLB V1 Summer to me was the smell of raspberries Cutting them off the vines Taste of stale water in dry dusty throats One day all these hills and trucks will be mine When they are. I’m going to sell Chorus You know Daddy only ever saw in Sepia His world was sepia. Sepia memories and dreams Thought his tomorrow was me……… I can’t and I don’t want to Live in his sepia coloured world V2 Fighting and denying hurt but what the hell Staying would have been death Left one night and didn’t even say goodbye Took a purse and memory of what dad said He wouldn’t love my child……. Chorus You know Daddy only ever saw in Sepia His world was sepia. Sepia memories and dreams Thought his tomorrow was me……… I can’t and I don’t want to Live in his sepia coloured world Bridge Came back home placed my new born in my dying Daddies arms First time he ever showed… tears or pride on the outside Chorus You know Daddy only ever saw in Sepia His world was sepia. Sepia memories and dreams Thought his tomorrow was me……… I can’t and I don’t want to Live in his sepia coloured world
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It reads more like a poem than a song lyric to me.
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Jim thanks for taking the time to read and comment, just interested then if you listened to the song on soundcloud as per the link above the lyric and how this came across as poetry does not tend to work into song.
Arty
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