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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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vs I'm not sensitive enough I very rarely fall in love I don't say hello, just say goodbye I don't make you laugh I just make you cry vs And when you open up a door You've never let me through before I never wipe away your tears Hold your hands allay your fears Chorus: I should be a better person I should make a brand new start I've just got to let you see There's another side to me vs I never hold you in my arms Compliment you on your charms Lay my coat beneath your feet Greet your parents when we meet vs I seldom take you for a meal Tell you exactly how I feel I always offer you my love Even when you've had enough Chorus: I should be a better person I should make a brand new start I've just got to let you see There's another side to me vs I should let you run away Live like a queen every day Cherish all the time we have Dry your tears and make you laugh vs I should offer you the earth It's nothing more than you deserve If I could only reach so far I would gather up the stars Chorus: I should be a better person I should make a fresh new start I've just got to let you see There's another side to me
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I should be a better person I should make a fresh new start I've just got to let you see There's another side to me
Yep! The man in this song has a lot of ground to make up!
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Hey Jim Yeah he's got some work to do. This is kind of about me when I was young. I didn't treat some women very well.
Cheers Joe
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Hi Joe,
I enjoyed the emotional roller coaster ride and introspection!
I thought that the first two lines of verse two (her not letting him in through the door) and the last two lines in verse four (about always giving love) kind of belonged together. If you put them all together, they give an interesting picture of what might be wrong with the relationship, from both of their different perspectives.
Lisa
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Hey Lisa I get what you're saying but in my mind they're two different subjects.
Cheers Joe
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Hey Lisa I get what you're saying but in my mind they're two different subjects.
Cheers Joe
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Last edited by joewatt; 05/06/15 08:58 AM.
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I like this Joe, it's a good account of a guy who knows where he's going wrong and understands the need to adress those faults. Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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hey Joe,you have a good write here,i enjoyed it!Mike
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Hey Travis Thanks. That's exactly what it is, he realises he's got to get his act together.
Cheers Joe
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Hey Mike Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
Cheers Joe
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Hey Mike Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
Cheers Joe
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Hey Mike Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
Cheers Joe
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Hey Mike Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
Cheers Joe
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