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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/05/24 01:49 PM
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Blue Light Special
Down at the brothels of the backside of the city The working girls are dressing down fixin' to get busy Every now and then they like to show their appreciation Give the John's a deal on their forbidden conjugation
There's a blue light special in the red light district Hurry get in line and buy yourself a ticket It's a two for one or any fantasy specific There's a blue light special,,,down in the red light district
You can check out any corner or shady little alley There's Suzy Q,Dawn and Trixie or Candi and Sally Many more to choose from just ask the Madame fare Just tell her what you want and she'll be happy to get you there
There's a blue light special in the red light district Hurry get in line and buy yourself a ticket It's a two for one or any fantasy specific There's a blue light special,,,down in the red light district
Grab your coat grab your hat don't forget your jimmy They'll treat you right hold you tight shake it and shimmy They're a love machine fine tuned enjoy how they work They're proud to say,,,the customer always comes first
There's a blue light special in the red light district Hurry get in line and buy yourself a ticket It's a two for one or any fantasy specific There's a blue light special,,,down in the red light district
Last edited by Michael LeBlanc; 07/16/14 07:06 PM.
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Cool one Mike!
I never heard a condom called a jimmy, or am I way off!
Geneva
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no Geneva,you got it right.Thanx for the read!Mike
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Over here they're known as "Johnny's" amongst other names.Good story Mike Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Haha! I really like this one Michael. Great hook! "There's a blue light special,,,down in the red light district" And who wouldn't love the line "They're proud to say,,,the customer always comes first". Damn, guess I'll need to wipe down my keyboard a second day in a row, lol. Very nice write! David
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lol,touchet David!Thanx for the read and comments!Mike
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thank ya there Travis!Mike
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Mike, I'd like you to chuck the there/there attempted rhyme, but the work/first doesn't bother me as much.
Those are the only nits.
Well thought, well written.
Pam
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okay,fixed the there/there rhyme Pam,if i spelt it korekly!Thanx!Mike
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This is a bold write, I think. I never heard it called a jimmy either.
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Hey Michael A very nice write, lots of fun as well.
Cheers Joe
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thanx Jim,it has a bunch of names,i thought i chose one everyone knew.Mike
thanx for your time Joe!Mike
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Love it Michael...great hook, descriptive in its pictures, some stellar lines...
Big bd from me!
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Hey Michael -- I somehow missed this -- wow -- I could really see this whole scene...I got absorbed, like I was reading a novel -- LOL! -- Lisa
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i appreciate that John!Mike
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heck Lisa,i forgot this one was here too.Thanx for the kind words.Mike
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