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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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Lamb.wavv
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/05/26 04:07 PM
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Not sure if this needs a bridge?
Talk With Him
If you're feeling like,your world's crumbling down
And there's no sign,of hope coming 'round
Talk with him,talk with him
If your days are stormy,you never see the sunshine
You've done lost everything,now it's hitting your mind
Talk with him,talk with him
So sit yourself down or take a little walk
Call on the man and have a little talk
Tell him your troubles and ask for his hand
No one listens better,he understands
All you gotta do,is talk with him
If everything you love,seems like it's falling apart
You got nowhere to turn to,you just need a new start
Talk with him,talk with him
If the life you're living,is spinning out of control
Look up to the Heavens,he'll mend your heart and soul
Talk with him,talk with him
So sit yourself down or take a little walk
Call on the man and have a little talk
Tell him your troubles and ask for his hand
No one listens better,he understands
All you gotta do,is talk with him
All you have to do,is talk with him,talk with him
It's easy to do,just talk with him,talk with him
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Mike,
It works with or without a bridge.
But a bridge would be nice, I think.
-Paul
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Hey Paul!Been a while,thanx for checkin' this one out.i might write a bridge and keep it on the side just in case.
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Hello Micheal.
Do not think you need a bridge here. Your verses and chorus bring the point home easily enough and since a bridge is the opportunity to either add or take the song some where lyrically and musically IMO you do not need it.
Loved the hook.
Douglas
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Hey Michael,
Really nice, conversational tone you've set that doesn't sound preachy -- just real! (I somehow wanted to see "walk with him" somewhere at the end too!) Good job!
Lisa
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A great write Michael,
I like Lisa's suggestion too!
Geneva
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Hi Mike
I think to off load your burdens once in a while is great therapy whether or not you believe in a god or not.
I agree with Lisa about the style of the lyric.It's good
Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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thanx for your thoughts and time Douglas!
well that i can easily fix Lisa!Thanx again for droppin' in and giving me some ideas.
Thanx a bunch Geneva!Always appreciated!
Hey Travis,thanx for checkin' it out!Your thoughts mean a lot,i appreciate that!
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Im thinking the style you have here with the refrain makes a Bridge unnecessary whether or not it adds to the tune I cant say but I think its fine without a bridge. I like the feel of this.
Cheers
Paul
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Michael--
You have a GOOD ONE WORKING HERE-- TRUTH from the heart!
Mackie
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thanx a bunch Paul!I appreciate your time and thoughts!
Say there Mackie,thanx for your time!
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