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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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Lamb.wavv
by Gary E. Andrews - 06/05/26 04:07 PM
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vs
Please Mrs Pettigrew open your arms to me
Casually exposing your bountiful charms to me
My body in spasm goes into arrest
As I stare open mouthed at your glorious chest
vs
Only fifteen I'm already in love
With a woman of thirty who babysits us
My heads in the clouds as I run for the bus
Everyone knows I'm in love
Chorus:
Love love love ,beautiful exciting
Yet so terribly frightening
Love love love, contentious and courageous
And quite possibly contagious
Love love love, a lifetime full of bliss
Trapped in a thirty second kiss
Love love love, everyone should be in love
Love love love, everyone should be in love
vs
Christine O'Leary sat at the next desk to me
She was almost fifteen with long slender legs I see
I'd follow behind her when she went to lunch
I couldn't find the words when it came to the crunch
vs
I plucked up the courage, asking her out
We went to a movie shared a bottle of stout
She finally showed me what love's all about
Ran to the rooftops to shout
Bridge:
Within a couple of months
She moved to a new school
left me alone with my pain
Everyone knows there's no
Fool like an old fool
I'd do it all over and over again
Chorus:
Love love love, beautiful exciting
Yet so terribly frightening
Love love love, contentious and courageous
And quite possibly contagious
Love love love, a lifetime full of bliss
Trapped in a thirty second kiss
Love love love, everyone should be in love
Love love love, everyone should be in love
Last edited by joewatt; 06/08/13 08:47 AM.
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Memories are endless pistachios, that we crack open often and savor the sweet meat of yesterday, never concerned all that much about how hard they are to crack, cause it's a tasty journey back. Lovely write Joe. ~~~Matt
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Hey Matt
Thanks for your kind(and poetic) comments. Glad you enjoyed it.
Cheers
Joe
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The joys,or perhaps not of growing up.I have a few tales to tell Joe of the fumbling and general uneasy feeling of being a teen.Something like Adrian Mole on speed
Good trip down memory lane
Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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OK, so I have to just say....eh.
The first verse is set up for early puberty but sounds too much like the 15 year old in the second verse. The second verse is more on the innocent side and I would swap the scenarios around and rework it. Maybe the baby sitter watched a movie with him and he felt like it could have been a date or he imagined it as one. The second girl causing the lustful thoughts from the boy are much more sensible, imho.
Anyway...that's what I think.
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Hey Travis
Thanks for your reply. It's just a short stroll down memory lane when you fell in and out of love every other week. Glad you liked it.
Peace
Joe
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Hey Caroline
The guy in vs1 is the same guy (at the same age) as in vs2 and mrs Pettigrew is his school teacher. guys at that age are horny all the time(or maybe that was just me) and the sight of a well turned ankle can set their pulse racing. Thanks for taking the time to reply.
Peace
Joe
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