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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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I'm asked
Why do i write, why waste my time? Searching constantly for words that rhyme. What do i care? Why do i need to fight? Wake up with my thoughts past midnight.
This is who i am who i've always been Not giving a damn what others can't see I learned long ago it's better being me
Believe me i've been called many things but when my stupid words start to sing You'll never know what it feels like You who believes you know everything
Unfinished
Last edited by Travis david; 08/12/18 11:16 AM.
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Travis,
Nice start, good idea. The last line gives this a different tone than what precedes it (I think), and not sure you'd want to go in that direction--but the focus on what keeps driving you is a theme well worth pursuing.
Regards,
Deej
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i'm with Deej on that last verse,i would stay on track where you started.Good luck with it.Mike
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Short but sweet. Probably could use a bit of expansion, IMO.
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Thanks folks appreciate your read.its unfinished so i will work on it Y Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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