13 members (Bill Draper, Fdemetrio, JAPOV, couchgrouch, ckiphen, Gary E. Andrews, Gavin Sinclair, Guy E. Trepanier, 3 invisible),
1,218
guests, and
743
robots. |
Key:
Admin,
Global Mod,
Mod
|
|
Welcome to the Just Plain Folks forums! You are currently viewing our forums as a Guest which gives you limited access to most of our discussions and to other features.
By joining our free community you will have access to post and respond to topics, communicate privately with our users (PM), respond to polls, upload content, and access many other features. Registration is fast, simple, and absolutely free; so please join our community today!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/05/24 01:49 PM
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2005
Posts: 4,909
Top 50 Poster
|
OP
Top 50 Poster
Joined: Jun 2005
Posts: 4,909 |
A Serial Winner (Neil Cotton)
She’s…. A singing angel with perfect pitch A guitar picker never missed a lick Books a concert any where any time A million Youtube hits online
She’s a serial winner. Her life’s pure gold Never been second Always top drawer Got a Midas touch Never took silver Don’t need no luck A serial winner.
I saw her at the Starbuck’s shop When our eyes met my heart stopped I knew her from the MTV Stepped aside she's in front of me
She’s a serial winner. Her life’s pure gold Never been second Always top drawer Got a Midas touch Never took silver Don’t need no luck A serial winner.
My jaw dropped when she said got it Then asked me where I want to sit
She’s a serial winner. Her life’s pure gold Never been second Always top drawer Got a Midas touch Never took silver Don’t need no luck A serial winner.
Now I’m one too.
Last edited by Neil Cotton; 05/14/18 11:03 PM.
|
|
|
|
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 1,385 Likes: 1
Top 200 Poster
|
Top 200 Poster
Joined: Dec 2016
Posts: 1,385 Likes: 1 |
Neil,
I like these lyrics--with the right melody and hook, you'll have something good going on. I'm not sure the bridge totally sells; you might want to play with that a bit more to make clear your intent as it's a cool turn of events. Will look forward to seeing how this one evolves musically.
All the best,
Deej
|
|
|
|
Joined: Jun 2005
Posts: 4,909
Top 50 Poster
|
OP
Top 50 Poster
Joined: Jun 2005
Posts: 4,909 |
thanks Deej The music is ready.
|
|
|
We would like to keep the membership in Just Plain Folks FREE! Your donation helps support the many programs we offer including Road Trips and the Music Awards.
|
|
Forums117
Topics125,750
Posts1,161,264
Members21,470
|
Most Online37,523 Jan 25th, 2020
|
|
"When will we all, as artists, creators and facilitators learn that the so-called experts in our lives are nothing more than someone who has stepped forward and called themselves an expert?" –Brian Austin Whitney
|
|
|
|