THAT'S NOT GREY IN HER HAIR THAT'S SILVER rewrite
V
We'll sit on the sofa, her head on my shoulder
we still have'nt changed we're just older
Still love her the same, still whisper her name
And when she's near, long to hold her
C
That's not grey in her hair that's silver
not faded blue eyes deep ocean calm river
not just a smile, a sweet scented meadow in summer
not grey in her hair that's silver
V
Still make our plans love old fashioned romance
So grateful that i still have that chance
For we sometimes travelled the rockiest roads
Our love strong and in step in the dance
B
When i touch her she looks at me like the first time
and she's still mine
C

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V
We'll sit on the sofa, her head on my shoulder
 we still have'nt changed  just  a little older
 Still love her the same, still whisper her name
  And when she's near, long to hold her
C
    That's not grey in her hair that's  silver
     they're  not faded  blue eyes they're an ocean or river
     And that's not just a smile, it's a sweet scented meadow in summer
V
  Still make our  plans and love old fashioned romance
   I'm So very grateful  that i still have that chance
   For we sometimes travelled  the rockiest roads
     Our love strong and in step in the dance
B
When i  touch her she looks at me like the first time
     and she's still mine
C

Hello anyone there?
A rewrite ,change of title. A sentimental Irish type of song in the making
Travis

Maybe simplify the chorus create a hook with a couple backing phrases.

See Black Velvet band

I like the sentiment in this, good write well done.

Nice one Travis.

Vic

Thanks Alan n Vic
Travis