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Ashes
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#1131166 - 10/02/17 09:59 AM
HAIKU SONG. work in progress
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LunaSimone
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©luna simone
VERSES SET ONE driving fast on a road keeping solitude
you hitchhiked now your new bicycle had broke
recycle broken ring crashing in the night
cuz you know you and i can last one more fight
BRIDGE we don't need hybrid cars just to make our mark
we just need compassion driving force of love
CHORUS and if i i could fly i would be a dove
come what may come what might come with push and shove
VERSES SET TWO i came home late one night wishing i could sleep
you catch train don't come back what is there to keep
what is there left to know when your love has gone?
(rep. bridge and chorus)
THIRD SET what is there left to know when your love has gone?
inspired view from a few hymns and hard rock songs
you don't know much difference from what those mean
they're the same it's because no difference is seen
i have learned much from hate hate and love and strength
but one thing still remains learning has no length
(anthemic vocal and instrumental break)
(repeat chorus first)
so i close this one song with a simple thought
live so free that you thing nothing of.....your thoughts.
Aries. INFP-T. Artist of all trades. Listener and creator of vast, unexpected musical genre writings/compositions. Art is the journey of a free soul. -Alev Oguz http://soundcloud.com/lunarsimonamusic
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#1131167 - 10/02/17 10:03 AM
Re: HAIKU SONG. work in progress
[Re: LunaSimone]
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LunaSimone
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noticed a glitch in the haiku inspired view from a few hymns and hard rock songs. more like: inspired view from a few hymns and rebel songs. works a little better  caught myself
Aries. INFP-T. Artist of all trades. Listener and creator of vast, unexpected musical genre writings/compositions. Art is the journey of a free soul. -Alev Oguz http://soundcloud.com/lunarsimonamusic
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#1131182 - 10/02/17 07:25 PM
Re: HAIKU SONG. work in progress
[Re: LunaSimone]
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Actually I am turning it into a song, and thanks for the recognition! Eventually I will put some vocals to this, just not right now. Here are some YouTube links from some modern rock female-fronted bands that kind of sound like their beats/melodies/melodic vibes may work well with this piece. You may have to open up your parameters here as quite a few of them turn up the volume and are pretty hard rocking: Flyleaf "Supernatural"https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sq09D7FqYT4 Tonight Alive "Amelia"https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q9LKbWlrx10
Aries. INFP-T. Artist of all trades. Listener and creator of vast, unexpected musical genre writings/compositions. Art is the journey of a free soul. -Alev Oguz http://soundcloud.com/lunarsimonamusic
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#1137084 - 02/14/18 12:13 AM
Re: HAIKU SONG. work in progress
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Brian Austin Whitney
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#1137104 - 02/14/18 06:55 AM
Re: HAIKU SONG. work in progress
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I'd like to hear how it sounds sung,do you have a recording?
Just a writer of words
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