JPF Home Page Forums Lyric and MP3 Feedback Creative Challenge Forum Song Challenge #27 Shame

The goal of our "Song Challenges" is to write songs/lyrics on demand within set parameters. We don't critique each other's songs in this thread (but you can say you like someone's song if you want to.) Please post your original works. If you have already written a song/lyric that fits within the parameters, please feel free to post it.

The new challenge is to write a song with " shame " as part of the hook. The hook can be in the chorus or as a repeated line in each of the verses. It could be serious or amusing. Your call.

Good luck to you!

Good Evenin' Mz Jeannie B!

Fun Challenge...here's one that's both serious AND humorous:

"SHAME" (C) 2009 by Stan Good, BMI

When You Were a Kid, The Lawn Sprinkler'd Dance
& Next Thing Ya Know, You Were Out There With No Pants
& Your Mama Would Give You The ULTIMATE Glance
& Say "SHAME"...

& You'd Go to Church, & Sit in That Pew
& Talk Right-&-Left to The Folks Next-to-You
Your Parents Said "SHHH" And Gave You a Clue
You Were "SHAMED"...

(BRIDGE, MOD UP)
The More Your Grew Up & The More You Got Older
You Got a Guilt-Trip, Lookin' Over Your Shoulder!
All Of Them TSK-TSK's..Startin' To Smoulder
In You...(How'd Ya Make It THROUGH?) Heh!

& Somehow Near-Puberty You Made The Connection
That Women & Sex-Thoughts..Caused An Erection
Which Messed-Up Your Dreams of Attaining Pedrfection
(What a SHAME!)

And Little-By-Little Your Attitude Slowly
Faded from Much You'd Regarded as Holy
& You Set Your Sights..a Little More-Lowly
Hey..NO SHAME!

The More You Grew UP..The MORE You Got-Wiser
That SOME "Shameful Stuff" kinda..TANTALIZED Her
& Sex was a Powerful TRANQUILIZER...
For You...(& HER TOO!)

So NOW That You're SHAMELESS, & Had a Few Kids
You're Doin' The SAME STUFF..Your Parents Did:
The Sprinkler is OUT..The BUTT-CHEEKS Stay-HID
(When You Say.."SHAME!")

But SHAME Never Screw-Up A Kid For All-Life
SOMEHOW They Still End Up as Husband-&-Wife
And SHAME Helps FORBIDDEN-STUFF Sure COME-TO-LIFE
(As You Get Older)

(TAG)
SHAME Sure Goes OUT-The-WINDOW
When You Turn OUT The Lights
(As You Get Older...!)

(C) 2009
All Rights Reserved.

Thanks, Stan. Looks Like I accidentally posted the topic twice.

Folks, I accidentally posted twice with this topic. please post your shameful songs, (Hee, Hee) on the other challenge 27 post. Thanks.