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It Hurts

Posted By: Irwin

It Hurts - 01/11/20 07:12 PM

Hi guys, this song is a song that I've been working on for some years now and now I've done the demo I am asking for some feedback.

https://soundcloud.com/irwin-abrigo/it-hurts

IT HURTS

Written & Produced by Irwin Abrigo
Vocals & All Vocals arrangement by Heather Rachael
©2020 Irwin Abrigo (Member Of BMI)

(VERSE 1)

I plan, to live , my whole life through
With me, and you, yes this is true
I remember you saying
Youíd wanted the same thing too
we met, I had wanted
Your love to be devoted

Snow is falling, Iím at home
It is cold, Iím alone
Against my window thereís a storm
And itís coming on strong

(CHORUS)
Outside, I can hear
Hear the sound of the wind, blowing
Wishing, Lying in my bed, Iím pretending
Pretending you were near
Just to think youíre not here it hurts
Just to think youíre not here it hurts
Just to think youíre not here it... hurts

(VERSE 2)
Never had, I ask, you for too much
So how can you make me feel sad?
I only ask for your touch
You know that youíre all that I had
I need your, hugs and kisses
I need you more than riches

I dim the lights, through the night
And this is, wishful thinking
Like the wind that blows through my door
I hope youíll come walking

(CHORUS)
Outside, I can hear
Hear the sound of the wind, blowing
Wishing, Lying in my bed, Iím pretending
Pretending you were near
Just to think youíre not here it hurts
Just to think youíre not here it hurts
Just to think youíre not here it, hurts

(BRIDGE)
Just to think, that youíd leave
Is what I canít believe
You left me with a broken heart
Pretending you were here

(Out)
Just to think youíre not here it hurts
Just to think youíre not here it hurts
Just to think youíre not here it... hurts
Posted By: Guy E. Trepanier

Re: It Hurts - 01/18/20 11:29 PM

Very good!
Well written and well done.

Have fun!
Posted By: Irwin

Re: It Hurts - 01/20/20 02:08 PM

Originally Posted by Guy E. Trepanier
Very good!
Well written and well done.

Have fun!


Thank you Guy, nice to hear this from you. I do appreciate. have a nice day.

Irwin
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