This is another re-mix.. I really need feedback regarding sound quality and overall balance. Thanks Ya'll

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=13967958

if we make the rules and we’re in control
if all we can lose is an empty soul….....
1-then why should I be loyal if none are greater than me
what is there to obey but my own vanity
2-I’ll claim my own image my name shall be adored
and be equal to my pride, an idol for the world
3-I’ll assume authority by all that is divine
disregarding ancient truth and claim all wisdom is mine
4-my desire will drive me on fortunes’ endless quest
drunk on the wine of fame my greed will never rest
5-my parents I will blame, the elders I will scorn
for holding me to task from the day I was born
6-I’ll be free to live my life loving all who follow me
hating all who criticize and all who came before me
7-I’ll marry whom I choose and love all whom I will
I’ll command an army of flesh to march just for the thrill
8-I’ll tear down all the walls and open all the cages
liars, thieves, and friends in need loyal to freedoms’ wages
9-the lie will be the truth, the truth will be for sale
I’ll revel in inequity and deny the fires of hell
10-all will serve my pleasure and covet what they see
I’ll bear witness to every lust and keep them enthralled to me
if we make the rules and we’re in control
if all we can lose is an empty soul….....

There you go Bowie.
Sounds about right to me. Maybe you could tone down the riff on guitar while your singing unless of course you want guitar to take preference.

Vic

Balance and sound quality sounds fine to me.
I Love the electric guitars and the Jim Morrison vocals
Not sure the melody is catchy enough for anyone to sing along to it - but its was a great track to listen to.

Paul

Hey JAPOV,

Interesting tune, and sonicially satisfying .

Where's the hook ?

cheers, niteshift

"Where’s the Hook?"

LOL... No, this one is definitely not a campfire song. Just one more and I will have compiled what I believe to be a "Real Christian Rock" album!

Cool Song Japov. Enjoyed it.

I think I like this best out of all I have listened too, "I can hear everything, clear and clean recording to me.
another song I can hardly hear your voice. sounds good to me J.....Lane

Thanks guys!

Good song with a point Vic brought up JAPOV regarding the guitar, other than this it sounds good!

John

JAPOV,

Yeah, I’m digging the sound of this one—soulful feel to this one; cool vocal. Great work on the drums and bass—like how the song picks up at 5. Good production touches on this throughout.

Regards,

Deej

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Love the whole concept, the timing is tight, the enuncaition is spot on, the message is powerful and the rules should be stricken from every one's brain cavities. otherwise Chaos will reign all over the planet. I find nothing wrong with the mix. The bass is phenomenal. It's loud but its fricking rock!!-lol-write on--right on!!!

@DeeJ;Matt Thanks Guys! It really does help to get out of my own head once in a while, otherwise I only sound good in my headphones lol.

Hey Vic (or anyone), give me a good example of a Bowie song that I could sing