Forget about her in ten years. I wrote the song. Mike Zaneski did everything else.
Thanks Mike.

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Saturdays still on my mind
finally leaving her behind
But I'll stay strong won't shed tears
and forget about her in ten years

V
Ain't decided where I will live
if I'll have more love to give
Doing fine then midnight appears
but I'll forget about her in ten years

B1
There's a blue moon in the sky
and he's got his eyes on me
I know he'll be back again tomorrow night
just you wait and see
V
Kicking stones all through the day
she cheated that's why I feel this way
Hey slow poke,another beer here
help me Forget about her in ten years

Music

B repeat

V
Got my home on my back
guess i'm free no longer trapped
No way, that's Just rain,not tears
forget about her in ten years

Outro
And when that blue moon disappears

Hi guys,


You did a very nice job on this one.
I especially liked this part......

Got my home on my back
Guess I'm free no longer trapped


Calvin


Maggie Udder..... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart

Hi Travis.
Very smooth production which helps to move along the simple story.
Has a happy sound to it. Another for the D. O'Donnell fans maybe.
Love Mike's falsetto ending.
Vic

Thanks Calvin.
Appreciate your comments
Travis

Enjoyed my listen, T and Z:

Nice work on all fronts. ----Dave

Thanks Vic
Pleased you liked it
Travis

Like that bridge:
"There's a blue moon in the sky
and he's got his eyes on me"
and the melody there is sweet too.

Your title and hook are great, put a smile on my face.

I was a bit unsure about this song at the start, but it is growing on me.

Travis (and Mike),

Well, this is better than anything I can imagine putting together on my own . . . really nice vocals, harmony and arrangement—another nice job by Mike (and agree with Vic—nice falsetto at the end). So really well done. That said, I’ll agree with Owen that the intro seems off—the contrast between the banjo and the accompanying instrument doesn’t quite mesh to my amateur ear. But then, the musical interlude is pretty killer. So take my feeble comments for what they are worth. in the end, I really liked what I heard—nicely done.

All the best,

Deej

Hi Dave
Thanks for the listen
Cheers
John

Cheers Owen for your listen and thumbs up
Travis

Loved the production on this! Nice song Travis!
The only nit I had was I wish the "ten years" represented something; I was hoping it was significant.

As an example, (that wouldn't work in this song)

"I'll forget about her in ten years....when I turn twenty"
Anyway, a nice tune to listen to!
Best,
-Mike

Is there nothing the talented Mr. Z can't turn his hand to? Vic's allusion to Daniel O'Donnell is a good one. This sounds just like something you would hear on Midwest Radio in Ireland, where they keep the flame of old-style country music burning

Nice lyric too with a clever hook.

This is really good. Great tune. Awesome production work and I love those vocal melodies. Thumbs up from me.

All the best
Robert

Awesome song...awesome recording....and love the performances. Lots of talent on display, here!!!
Great stuff,
-Tom

Hi Dave
You under estimate yourself!
Thanks for the listen and comments
Cheers
John

Hi Mike
I did have two different bridges but decided on a repeat of the initial one with the hook ending a verse
Thanks for your listen and comments
Travis

Americana is enjoying pop status these days.

Mumford and Sons, Avette Brothers, Bon Iver and it's in many of the hits on radio.

That's where id go with it, not pure bluegrass but with a pop influence.

Enjoyed it. Sounds good nice melody

Hi Gordon
Thanks for your thumbs up.
I wanted to do a country/ bluegrass like this for sometime and pleased with Mikes talents once more
Travis

Hi Robert
Great to know this worked for you and comments have been favourable
Cheers
Travis

Hi Tom
Thanks for your ears and comments much appreciated
Travis

Hi Fdmetrio
Thanks for your time and listen i'm a fan of some of those guys.
Regards
Travis

John & Michael,

I was looking at this one about to turn to page two.......which as we know is kind of like a "blue hole." I thought I'd snag it before it fell into that abyss. I hadn't heard this'n, but just absolutely enjoyed it! Like Vic said above, just makes you happy--happy is a good thing when there seems so much in this world that constantly interrupts our joy. Bluegrass yes but it seemed to have a little modern country ho-down feel too. Nicely arranged by Mr. Z and great vocals. Glad I took a look down the page!

steady-eddie

Hi Ed
Yes it's been hanging on by a thread for some time.
Thanks for reviving it and the listen
John