How Many Tears In A Broken Heart

No matter a rainbow
No matter the sunshine
I can't grow
If you're not mine

The future stops now
The circle is broken
Silence so loud
From words unspoken

How many tears in a broken heart
How long the sadness deep inside
Time an eternity we spend apart
With dreams scattered far and wide

The canvass of love
Has faded to black
It hangs high above
Blue ribbon attached

So far ahead we pass the test
So far behind what really works
Best of the best
We prove love hurts

How many tears in a broken heart
All too soon i'm about to know
Clutching my pillow here in the dark
One by one i'll count them slow
One by one i'll count them slow

Hi Michael.

Good title and some good lines.
Two suggs, use or lose:

1st. chorus:
Time AN eternity we spend apart
With dreams we SCATTERED far and wide

2nd. chorus:
How many tears in a broken heart
It's hard to separate one from the flow

Good luck with it.

Vic

Alright,Vic,made those changes.Thanks for that and for stopping by for a spell. Mike

Michael,

Nice write--really like the close on this one. Will definitely look forward to hearing this--it's gonna be a good one!

All the best,

Deej

Hay Deej,thanks fro checking it out and kind words.Not sure if it will get music but i would like to hear it myself. Mike

Very nice Mike.

Thanks Barry,i hope you're doing well these days. Mike