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TAKE ONE MORE CHANCE

Posted By: Mackie H.

TAKE ONE MORE CHANCE - 10/19/20 02:38 PM

SOME TIMES A SECOND CHANCE WORKS

TAKE ONE MORE CHANCE
ゥ 2020 Mackie Humphries

V1
Pour me another Scotch on the rocks
My baby Sue she wants one too
We致e both been stepping outside the box
All our friends are thinking we're through.

CH
Take one more chance our love is true
This time around I値l be Mr Cool
Forget the past and start anew
Take one more chance I still love you

V2
Tonight we値l prove they致e all been wrong
We come in here to drink and dance
Been missin' love for way too long
We both agree to take one more chance.

CH
Take one more chance our love is true
This time around I値l be Mr Cool
Forget the past and start anew
Take one more chance I still love you
Take one more chance I still love you

SOLO
BR
I know Sue wants the things I do
I値l promise her that I値l be true
Take one more chance...I still love you

CH
Take one more chance our love is true
This time around I値l be Mr Cool
Forget the past and start anew
Take one more chance I still love you
Take one more chance I still love you


Mackie
Posted By: John W. Selleck

Re: TAKE ONE MORE CHANCE - 10/20/20 07:40 PM

Hi Mackie,
Looks like you may have a goodun in the works. I think I would either add one more verse, or put the first chorus in between the verses and add another chorus in. Just my thoughts, KOS.
Posted By: Mackie H.

Re: TAKE ONE MORE CHANCE - 10/20/20 09:17 PM

John

Thanks for your input

I just put the CH between V1 and V2

I appreciate your help

Mackie
Posted By: johnparagreen

Re: TAKE ONE MORE CHANCE - 10/25/20 11:43 PM

Hi M, I like this as well, but it sings to the audience in the verses and to her in the chorus,I'd try and keep it directed to her.
all the best,john
Posted By: Mackie H.

Re: TAKE ONE MORE CHANCE - 10/26/20 01:57 PM

John

This one is still in the works--I'll re-focus the verses using your thoughts--Most of my lyrics need a little help!

Thanks for your insight.

I listened to several of your songs on sound click--Lots of ideas in your music--I really like The Pawn Shop Blues

I'm Scotch-Irish with Cherokee thrown in!

Write on!

Mackie
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