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Posted By: ckiphen Untitled - 07/22/19 03:34 PM
Untitled
Verse
I robbed a father of his son.
I broke a mother’s heart.
I stole the future from a child.
I left behind deep scars.
Pre chorus
It came as a revelation.
An awakening of my soul.
The light of a new beginning
An adventure to make me whole.
Chorus
Sometimes the truth frees a man.
Sometimes it does him in.
Verse
I fell upon my knees and pleaded lord.
Help this poor sinner change.
I the light of a burning bush
This blind man found his way.
Pre chorus
It came as a revelation.
An awakening of my soul.
The light of a new beginning
An adventure to make me whole.
Chorus
Sometimes the truth frees a man.
Sometimes it does him in.
Verse
I robbed a father of his son.
I broke a mother’s heart.
I stole the future from a child.
I left behind deep scars.
Bridge
I can’t undo my sins.
No one ever can.
But I can die trying.
To be a better man.
Chorus
Sometimes the truth frees a man.
Sometimes it does him in.
Posted By: ckiphen Re: Untitled - 07/22/19 03:36 PM
Looking for singer songwriter to do this. I have no problem with changes to the lyric. Just trying to get some good songs done.
Posted By: LunaSimone Re: Untitled - 07/22/19 05:30 PM
I'm going to cut and paste this into my reply and then put my changes in all caps, so bear with me and if it's still hard to tell the changed from yours let me know. I like this story. Raw but good for a demo album!
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INNER DEMONS
THE MESSAGE
Verse

I robbed a father of his son.
I broke a mother’s heart.
I stole the future from a child.
I left behind deep scars.
Pre chorus
It came as a revelation, A MESSAGE
An awakening of my soul.
The light of a new beginning
FIGHTING WHAT WAS INSIDE TO make me whole.
Chorus
Sometimes the truth frees a man.
Sometimes it does him in.
SOMETIMES TO SEE WHERE YOU REAP WHAT YOU SOW
YOU GOTTA BACKTRACK, FIGHT YOUR DEMONS AND WIN
Verse
I fell upon my knees and pleaded lord.
Help this poor sinner change.
I the light of a burning bush
This blind man found his way.
Pre chorus
It came as a revelation, A MESSAGE
An awakening of my soul.
The light of a new beginning
FIGHTING WHAT WAS INSIDE TO make me whole.
Chorus
Sometimes the truth frees a man.
Sometimes it does him in.
SOMETIMES TO SEE WHERE YOU REAP WHAT YOU SOW
YOU GOTTA BACKTRACK, FIGHT YOUR DEMONS AND WIN
Verse
I robbed a father of his son.
I broke a mother’s heart.
I stole the future from a child.
I left behind deep scars.
Bridge
I can’t undo my sins.
No one ever can.
But I can die trying.
To be a better man.
Chorus
Sometimes the truth frees a man.
Sometimes it does him in.
SOMETIMES TO SEE WHERE YOU REAP WHAT YOU SOW
YOU GOTTA BACKTRACK, FIGHT YOUR DEMONS AND WIN

FINAL VERSE
I can’t undo my sins.
No one ever can.
But I can die trying, ACCEPT, LEARN TO MOVE FORWARD
AND BECOME a better man.
Posted By: LunaSimone Re: Untitled - 07/22/19 05:33 PM
actually lemme fix the final verse

FINAL VERSE
I can’t undo my sins.
No one ever can.
BUT I CAN TAKE MY LESSON, ACCEPT, LEARN TO MOVE FORWARD
AND BECOME a better man.
Posted By: ckiphen Re: Untitled - 07/24/19 05:40 PM
Luv the changes
Posted By: LunaSimone Re: Untitled - 07/25/19 04:41 PM
hey glad to help!
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