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{Was listening a bit to Spirit FM this AM, and they were feeding-out some VERY Inspirational Sayings, including the Hook that's Here-Presented. Then, to my amazement, the Announcer said "Any Idea WHERE these Statements ALL came FROM? They're in a Toyota Ad..." Waaal...NO Problemo--I'll take Inspiration from Anywhere I Can FIND It..heh!}


Great Wall of China Started with A Single Stone
The Pyramids..OOO..The Same Way Too:
Took MANY-A-Man...EACH HAND-By-Hand...
Now..The Fate-of-The-FUTURE..is..ALL -Up-to-YOU, So

(CHORUS)
DON'T..STAND..STILL
MOVE..On Your DREAM
DON'T..STAND..STILL
Don't Ever WASTE..THE TIME IN-BETWEEN

You Only Get So-Many DAYS..So-Many NIGHTS
Before You Exit Planet Earth...
Don't Waste a Minute..Dig-In & Fight
Go Out & BUILD What-You-WANT..For ALL-IT'S-WORTH, &

(REPEAT CHORUS)

(BRIDGE)
Don't WAIT for Whatever-You-WANT...To COME-to-You
It Sure WON'T HAPPEN..'Til YOU MAKE YOUR MOVE...

(INSTRUMENTAL BIT)

(PRE-)
Love & Power..Fortune & Fame
They're ALL-Acquired..(In) The VERY SAME WAY...(Hey)..

(DOUBLE CHORUS-REPEAT)

(TAG)
Don't Waste The Time..In-Between, Yeah...
DON'T...STAND...STILL!

(C) 2013 by Stan Good, BMI
All Rights Reserved.

Hi Stan,

This is very motivating for someone like me, who's a master at Standing Still! Thanks for the jump start!

Lisa

Like this one Stan...music?

Bill

STAN THE MAN--

SOME OPTIONS:

CH #1 FOR VERSE #1

(CHORUS #1)
DON'T..STAND..STILL
KEEP ON ROCKIN’
DON'T..STAND..STILL
BRING BIG STONES IN

CH#2 FOR VERSE #2

DON'T..STAND..STILL
COS TIME’S WASTIN’
DON'T..STAND..STILL
KEEP ON BUILDIN’

WRITE ON BRO’

Mackie

HiDee Mz Maryland!!!

Yeah, I'm as-Big-a-Procrastinator as the Next Guy..heh...But...the Phrase DID ring-True when I heard it!

And...so-far...House Sale Deal is Again-ON...after a kinda Hellish-Day where La Femme & BuyerGuy locked-horns Twice/Deal got killed. So...I'm no longer standing still again...Whew!!!

Friday's gotta be a Smoother Day...I'm taking BG to Sarasota for an Annual Fan Collectors Bash...returning Sunday AM. (Should now be a Hassle-Free Weekend...YAYYYYY!!!!)

Thanks for Your Very Kind Visit & Words!
Best Wishes, M'LadyChum, & a Wee Forehead-Smooch!
Stan

G'Morning T-Bro!!!

Hmmm...Those'll make prettygood ALT Choruses..tho they don't exactly say exactly what I was shootin'-for. They DO Work!!!

Not too-sure I heard this AS Rock, so CH Sug 1 isn't Exactly On-Point. But CH2 IS pretty durn Good, Amigo..& Thank-You for the kind Option there! (This feels like Pop/R&B..or Whatever They Call It these days...heh!)

IF it ever gets demoed, I'll pitch it to that Tony Whatsisname that does all the Self-Help Seminars...(Little? I can Never Remember Names..worth a Hoot!)

Thanks for Your Kind Visit & Fine Sugs, Amigo!!!

Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug,
Stan

WOOPS...Sorry Brother Bill...I dozed-off at the keypad last evening..turned on the computer/thought I'd already thanked Ya last eve...hence this Thank-You bein' Out of Order!!!

I have the world's WORST Short-Term Memory...I'm really Lucky I'm Old & NOW have a Good Excuse for what's been a Lifetime-Condition..heh!

I've sorta promised myself that a week after I've sold the house off, I'm gonna start Keyboards or Guitar lessons! (Maybe Both!) Own a buncha each/never had time to learn 'em yet! But I'm fairly-sure this'll get Demoed before the year's run-by!

Thanks Amigo for Your Kind Words & Visit!
Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug,
Stan

Hey Stan.
Great message! Comment below, keep or sweep

Great Wall of China Started with A Single Stone
The Pyramids..OOO..The Same Way Too: (Know you were going for an inner rhyme, but you've got [color:#FF0000]same and too.Too is not needed, except for the rhyme. You can leave it off and the line still makes sense. I tend to avoid inner rhymes because they sometimes bring more attention to themselves than improve the storyline.[/color])

G'Mornin' MeisterMigo!!!

I was actually just addin'-in a Syl I thought it Needed-There..heh-heh....so...MMMMMMM could also be tossed-in. I'll leave it up to the Final Singer, tho if it was me, I'd prolly go with the OOOO..heh-heh!

I, Too, like The Message...(Guess I oughta listen to Christian Stations More-Often...heh-heh!) OK..I Will!!! ;-)>

Thankee for The Backpat & Fine Sug this AM, Amigo...

HOPE by End of March, Early-April..to be Up There seein' You & Eatin' some Steaks! Best Weekend Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug,
Stan

Well that post of mine was so minimal...blink or nod and she's gone....anyhoo....meant to say...I would attempt music...but you know my minimal offerings...NOT demos.

But this should make a great sounding demo full music....maybe gospel R&B....shop it to Trucks & Thedeski(sp?) or maybe the lovely Adele.
Bill

Hi Again & Happy Weekend, Bill!

I just remembered the last name of that "Tony Guy"..it's "Robbins"..I think...(Motivational Guru Fellah..heh!)

As we Clock-Sellin' Folks wallow outta this Recession, I have high hopes of Demoin' a few...& this'n's among The Contenders.

Many Thanks for the Motivating & Sugs for who-to-send it to, Amigo!

Continued Best Wishes,
Stan