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http://www.reverbnation.com/jimmycraig/song/16261355-still-that-girl-country-originalStill That Girl Jimmy (James) Craig Smith ©2012 you found a new lil wrinkle on your forehead jeans fit a lil' tighter than they once did have a few more da-ays of bad hair a lil'more set in your ways I dont care Chorus still that girl who rocks my world your love still feels so right still like the first time first kiss first night your still that girl still turn me on love burning strong knew all along you'd be that girl stilll that girl you take a lil more time to put your face on dont burn the midnight oil all night long you get a lil' tipsy faster than you used to not living like a gypsy cause you refuse to Repeat Chorus Bridge still still that girl still still that girl still still that girl Repeat Chorus Repeat Bridge Still
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Nice song. I had to search for it because your link doesn't work (it might be because it only for you 'cause you're logged into the site). Here's a link to your page there: http://www.reverbnation.com/jimmycraig
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Thanks Rick...I had changed files to another version and forgot..I apologize...thanks for the positive review. JC
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Great rhythm on the guitar, good verse melody. The chorus is catchty and I still have it in my head :-) Think it just needs something a different at the end to break it up. After a while it felt a tiny bit repetive.
Good listen, enjoyable song.
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Thanks Sarah, you may be right..I have been toying with the idea of a bridge for this..to break up the repetitiveness...or open to a collab with you..if you have an idea...its good to have a female influence on this one for sure.
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Hi Jimmy, I think Sarah's correct...it does get repetitive. For my taste, your chorus is way too long. If you're not averse to having your chorus change each time, you could split it in half. Sing the first half for the first chorus and the second half for the second chorus. The phrasing's not quite right, but something like this...
"(You're) still that girl who rocks my world your love still feels so right still like the first time first kiss first night your still that girl"
"you're still that girl who rocks my world still turn me on love burning strong knew all along you'd be (the one) you're stilll that girl"
Something to think about, Kurt
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nice idea Kurt..I never thought of that.. thanks..jc
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