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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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vs Right from the start you saw nothing but good In me Told me there's nothing,there's nothing I couldn't be I found It hard to believe after years of neglect But you gave me hope,taught me love and respect vs Still for a while I was lost in confusion Did you actually smile or was it just an Illusion I found it hard to believe that my life was worth living And when I made a mistake you could be so forgiving
Chorus: You took hold of my heart,said that you'd care for it It was torn apart,you started repairing it Little by little you rebuilt my life Complete me girl..become my wife vs Now it's eighteen months on and our dream's getting stronger And though I still get it wrong,I feel I finally belong here Now I've got a good job,and in you have a family I'm doing my best to be all that I can be vs You saved my life,of that there's no doubting Without fussing and fighting,screaming and shouting There's along way to go,but I think we can make it So I offer my love,honey please take it
Chorus: You took hold of my heart,said that you'd care for it It was torn apart you started repairing it Little by little you rebuilt my life Complete me girl..become my wife
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Hi Joe Welcome back not seen you for a while around this forum. Good sentiments in the lyric as a suggestion how about making the verse after the chorus a bridge to break it up a little? Best of luck with it Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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UK JOE--
SOUNDS TO GOOD TO BE TRUE--BUT SOMETIMES A DIAMOND --I HEAR AN OUTRO
SOMETHING LIKE:
I CAN READ YOUR LIPS……. COMPLETE ME YOU'RE SAYING I DO.
WRITE ON,
Mackie
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Hey Joe,this is pretty good,it is a hard road and it does take two!Mike
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Hey Travis Nice to hear from you mate.I've been in and out of hospital for the last few months so I haven't posted anything.
Anyway(famous last words)things seem to be getting better,so I've started writing again. Glad you liked it.
Cheers Joe
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Good song I'd like to here it with music
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Hey Mackie Yeah as you say hard to believe,still stranger things have happened. Not a bad idea for an outro,I'll give it some thought.
All the best Joe
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Hey Mike Thanks for checking this out,glad you liked it.
Cheers Joe
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Yeah me too James,I haven't got around to writing it yet.
All the best Joe
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Hi Joe,
Sweet and uplifting -- very nice!
Lisa
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Hey Lisa Thanks very much,glad you liked it.
Peace Joe
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Hey Joe
Great song! Have no idea what genre of music you have going with this but man by the second line my reading had converted into rap. Could here it so clearly...just my opinion. Loved it!!
Looking forward to reading more from you Joe!
Cheers Shirl
It's never too late to try something new.
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Hey Shirl I have no idea what the music's going to be yet,but I see what you mean about the rap thing,it does have that kinda flow.
Glad you liked it.
Peace Joe
Last edited by joewatt; 02/10/13 02:01 PM.
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