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See it as a lively fun song
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We'll close our country road, till midnight
even turn off our only traffic light
We've got big bowls of fresh fruit punch
lots of fried chicken for folks to munch
When we've danced up a healthy appetite
at the hoedown in hicktown tonight
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We've some good 'ole music from way back when
got a fiddle player taught by Uncle Penn
We've hired the finest caller
you oughta hear this guy holler
Everyone will be dressed party nice
For the hoedown in hicktown tonight
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They'll be courtin couples slippin' away
to go kissin' and squeezin' in the hay
You'll hear them gigglin' and sneezin'
Then they'll fall asleep until the break of day
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The hottest thing since the fourth of July
kids got pop bottle rockets to light up the sky
They'll be great prizes and raffles,
ducking for big rosie red apples
collect your tickets off Miss Bailey or Dwight
for the hoedown in hicktown tonight

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There you go Travis the country's coming out of you now, I can see banjo's and fiddles, people clapping hands and dancing all around a town party. Good imagery, pardner

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Travis, I think I attended the event about 20 years ago. Had a great time. I see the line dancers in your song got a few kicks in at Blake Shelton. But no damage was done.

I agree with James, this should be loaded with fiddles and banjos and some real hooting and hollering. Pass me some of that fried chicken.


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Hi James
Just the way i see it too! lolThanks for your comments
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Ditto to James' comment Dan.Thanks for looking and your comments
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Hey Travis,
Tweaks/comments below, keep or sweep smile


I'm not sure about putting the hook at the beginning and end of each verse. Normally in an AABA song, the hook is in either the first line or last, not both. If you decide to change, keep the hook in the last line.

Words in [color:#FF0000]red are duplicate words. Try to avoid this.[/color]

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There's a hoedown in hicktown tonight
We'll close our county road, till nearly midnight
We've got big bowls of fresh fruit punch
lots of fried chicken for you to munch
Be the best thing here since electric lights
There's a hoedown in hicktown tonight
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There's a hoedown in hicktown tonight
we'll turn off our only traffic light
We've hired the finest caller
you oughta hear this guy holler
Everyone will be dressed party nice
For the hoedown in hicktown tonight
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We like our country classics,
Blake Shelton might say we're "jackasses"
But we're kinda stuck in our ways-
nothing wrong with the old fashioned way
Maybe in about three years, when his attitude clears-
he'll just realise, how wet he was behind the ears
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There's a hoedown in hicktown tonight
lots of dancing and squeezing real tight
They'll be great prizes and raffles,
ducking for big rosey red apples
Get tickets from Miss Bailey or Dwight
for the hoedown in hicktown tonight


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Hi Shayne
Thanks as usual, thought the scheme may have worked but I bow to your knowledge as a musician and changed it all.
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Have done further changes to the verses to make it read better.
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call da pimp,there's a ho-down!

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I'll take your word for that Mike lol
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HiDee Bro Trav'!!!

Gotcha a Goodin' Here, Amigo...(Tho might wanna have alt.-lines for the Blake Shelton Brouhaha...usually takes a Year or More for a Song to sift thru the Filtering Process & get cut/that Li'l Incident'll be soon-enough-forgotten..he's already apologized to Ray Price/Apology's been Accepted. Publicly.)

Here come some Line Sugs:

"A HOT fiddle player taught by Uncle BEN"

"KIDS GOT POP-BOTTLE ROCKETS TO LIGHT UP THE SKY" ('Cuz Firecrackers stay on-the-Ground, Mostly)

"Duckin' for FRESH-PICKED MACINTOSH apples"

(KOS) 'em all...& Good Luck with a Goodie!

Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug,
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Thanks Stan, done a rewrite on the B and used the pop bottle line
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TRAVIS--

READS LIKE A GOOD TIME ON SATURDAY NIGHT! I HAVE BEEN THERE TOO!

WRITE ON--

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Very colourful write Travis, even without the "Yeehaw". smile
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Thanks Mackie, pleased you liked it
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Hi Vic
I was going to add a "yeehaw" or even a "Heehaw" Still time yet!
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