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my voice ACTUALLY sounds good on here for once, it's a positive upbeat song, and I have finally found my niche: jazz. It's hard to come up with a song like this however unless I hear a good song in my Spotify mixes, so I have to pull my weight around pretty hard to get to where I like my voice AND my songwriting enough to put something on here. This is about the excitement of meeting someone you're smitten with for the first time, or at least knowing you'll make your way into totally liking them, even if you barely knew them earlier. Whatever, you might think the song is cute but I consider it pretty creative for what i've been doing. listen to it here: http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11693877POCO A POCO Poco a poco Little by little I stepped into your world And once there I found Love Love Love Love Love Love Love oh Love... Laughter and gossip They don’t distract me I look around And then I saw your Eyes Eyes Eyes Eyes Eyes Eyes Eyes your...eyes Nothing’s the same And you are to blame I think I’ve got you Under my skin You believe in that For that I believe in You You Si Si Oui Oui Yes Yes Uh huh Uh huh Judging by the weather Feels good to be together Lovebirds by nature Attract me with your Vibes Vibes Oh vibes Yeah vibes Vibes Vibes Your vibes Those vibes Adjectives don’t describe No words are needed Just be here with me Stay away from the hot sun in Side Side Side Side Side by side Side by side Yeah yeah we stand Under the shade I stand under your wing Nothing is better with you I can sing Nothing is better than knowing I can do my thing Along with you It’s tried and true Been there with others But we’re like sister and brother Only in a different Way Way Way Way And it ain’t Blown out Of proportion Friends of a feather Here we be jammin Together Together With you forever Birds of a feather Nothing is better Poco a poco Little by little We’ll get to know each other Easily Breezily Through thick in thin I’ve won the right one Poco a poco Little by little We’re in this together It’s perfect the way we are. ©2012 Bianca Woodward
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bianca, poco a poco diventerai una bravissima songwriter ;-) good song idea, and I like some lines but a bit too long imho ciao!
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Maybe cut back on the effects on the vocal as you did at the end. Because it is long, it could use some breaks with a different melodic section/bridge JMHO...not schooled in Jazz
Last edited by Neil Cotton; 06/08/12 10:17 AM.
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Interesting tune. Maybe make the vocal a bit more prominant.
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I'm not as much into jazz, but the music sounded good. The biggest nit I have is that there is WAAAAAY too much echo on the vocal. Sounds like you're singing in a tunnel. Kill that for the final mix. Just curious as to why you killed the effects for the end of the song? The switch from echo to no echo was very jarring.
I'd definitely make the vocal more prominent like Jim suggested.
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I didn't mind the echo at all. I couldn't understand the words as well but it sounded good.
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