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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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{Simple AM Head-Melody leads to Simple Country-Rock Lyric at-Breakfast this AM...}
Hear My Heartbeat? It's Gettin'-Faster Any Time That I Been Walkin' Past Her Every Sweet Step..She Builds-Up My Memories (& I'M SO EASY T'PLEASE)
Feel My Heartbeat? It's Gettin' Stronger Because Our Chats Keep Gettin'-Longer & Each Conversation..Ends Up In a Squeeze (& I'M SO EASY T'PLEASE)
(BRIDGE) I Might've Settled for Somethin'-Less Than Those Beautiful Curves, Fillin'-Out that Red Dress Both My Eyes are Surprised..Pleasantly..When She's In Her Jeans (& I'm SO EASILY PLEASED--)
(SOLO TIME)
Every Heartbeat I Get a Revelation She Fires-Up My Mind & My Imagination {ALTS: To Further Exploration/ To A-dult Education} I Need This Woman's Love..So-Thrilled She Needs Me (When I'M SO EASY T'PLEASE..)
(TAG) I Give Her All-I-Got, She Well-Returns the Favor, Y'See (& I'M SO EASY T'PLEASE!)
(C) 20l2 by Stan Good, BMI All Rights Reserved.
Last edited by "Tampa Stan" Good; 03/08/12 11:16 AM.
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Hi, Very much like this one. Well written with a good strong meter. I'd vote for "My Imagination" in verse after solo break. Thanks, Cathy
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Pleasant song, nice and lighthearted.
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Hey Stan, This one doesn't need much! A few tweaks below, keep or sweep Hear My Heartbeat? It's Gettin'-Faster Every Time I'mI Been Walkin' Past Her Feel My Heartbeat? It's Gettin' Stronger Because Our Evening Chats Keep Gettin'-Longer & Each Conversation..Ends Up In a Squeeze (BRIDGE) I Might've Settled... for Somethin' -That's- Less Than Those Beautiful Curves, Fillin'-Out that Red Dress & Both My Eyes..Get Surprised..Pleasantly..When She's In Her Jeans (& I'm SO EASILY PLEASED--) (SOLO TIME) Every Heartbeat I Get a Revelation She Fires-Up My Mind & My Imagination {ALT: To Further Exploration}With adult educationI Need This Woman's Love.. Thrilled that She Needs Me
“I usually start with a title or maybe a little rhyme or phrase.” - Harlan Howard
Co-writing = Compromise!
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G'Mornin' Mz Cathy, & Thanks for Your Backpat & Kind Visite!
I like the "Imagination" line a lot, too...
(See whatcha think about Shayne's "Adult Education" Sug...it's a Hoot...& I like it Lots!)
It was fun penning a Mellow One like this...
Thanks Again for Your Kind Visit & Words, Best Wishes & Big Hugs, Stan
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G'Mornin' Brother Jim
Yeah, an easy write/good head melody. (Tho the Gal it was penned-for says I'n NOT all that Easy-To-Please..heh...& guess she should know...) ;-)>
But I like to THINK I'm easy-to-get-along-with...
Many Thanks for Your Kind Visit & Words, Amigo-- Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug, Stan
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G'Mornin' Meister-Bro!
Da Fixes are IN...& I Thanks Ya For 'Em All, Amigo!
(Proof-Positive I CAN be Easy-to-Please, eh???) ;-)>
Many Thanks, Amigo...& we'll soon haveta slaughter an Entire Herd just to cover the Steak Dinners I Owes Ya--
Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug, Stan
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