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[color:#000000]listen here[/color]... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewartLonger Than The Sm[color:#66FFFF]oke Rings From A Kiss © words and music by C. Stewart ( Sept 21, 2011 )
We live in a castle Half a mile from heaven My princess has yellow hair
We live in a castle Barefooted lovers Having a royal affair
CHORUS... It's an off screen, love scene No props, no cast
How long should a love scene last Longer than the smoke rings from a kiss If you love your princess like this
Love her till the sun goes down, love her through the night Hold her close and let her know you're there
Longer than the smoke rings from a kiss
We live in a castle Surrounded by flowers And hummingbirds that sing
We live in a castle A forest of pleasure Love what the butterflies bring
CHORUS... It's an off screen, love scene No props, no cast
How long should a love scene last Longer than the smoke rings from a kiss If you love your princess like this
Love her till the sun goes down, love her through the night Hold her close and let her know you're there
Longer than the smoke rings from a kiss [/color]
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Good Morning Calvin !
What a great chorus and melody there in the refrain !! -- I like the horns and the UPBEAT happy feel over all -- good singing and guitar too. You still have your unique sound going and it works well in this ! ; )
Have a nice day !
jm
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Another Calvinatin thought provokin ditty.
That had to be one hot kiss Calvin! I mean like "smokin".
Doug
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trippy Calvin!Enjoyed it!
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Hey there Calvin.....once again, cool song....I dig your lyric that seems to be in step with the music....which has a Mad Hatter quality to it that is really sureal.
Good stuff -Tom
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Hi Doug, Good to see ya & THANK YOU for listening. yeah...kisses are underrated. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Hey Calvin Nice to hear another of your originals. As always I love your creative music arrangements.
Your vocals and lyrics always draw me in.
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Calvin , I really enjoyed the listen .
I see that you have 304 songs up on Soundclick . I bow in humbleness . Keep them comming !!!
Keep up the good work !!!
All the best Jan
"You have to react to what's around you in the moment, whatever the music is. Just think of it as some place you have to enter and you need to find the key."
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Very cool, Calvin - an excellent line to build a song around. Yeah, the music is perfect for this. Tom is on the money - mad hatter is a good descriptor for you. Actually, you'd look cool in a top hat, I think. Scott
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Hi Jan, Hope things are going ok for you in your part of the world. I appreciate you listening to my stuff, THANKS a lot ! Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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hi Scott, Good to see ya. Thanks for listening. Mad hatter, ha... well I'm not really much of a hat guy although I have to wear one EVERY day at work. But I enjoy seeing the different types of hats people wear :-) Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Good one Calvin. Sorry I have not been around much this summer to listen to your postings! I enjoyed this one quite a bit. Good job on the lyric.
Ricky
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Hello Ricky, Hey, always good to see ya, thanks a bunch for taking the time to listen & comment. I appreciate that. Have a good day. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Calvin--
VERY CLEVER SONG--I CAN CLOSE MY EYES AND SEE YOUR VIDEO -- SOFT FOCUS--YOU'RE WEARING A PURPLE HAT, NAKED WITH ONE BIG SMOKE RING BED THAT IS ADJUSTABLE --HIS AND HER NUMBERS!
YOU NEED TO GET SOME HATS MADE UP--PURPLE WITH DRIFTING SMOKE RINGS!
KEEP LOVING 1/2 MILE FROM HEAVEN!
Mackie
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Very cool Calvin!
I knew I'd really like this one and your music/ vox does it justice.
I didn't quite get the "hatter" comments.
I'm a hat person, well, I wear mostly baseball caps I guess!
Geneva
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Hey Calvin...
You da most creative guy around these parts! I always try to anticipate what music you'll put to the lyric as I read it...I'm almost always wrong...I love that element of suprise!
Very cool, my friend...so cool, I can see frost hanging off of it! Digging it big time! I like the smile this one put on my face! my one word description...charming!
Later...Al (and Di)
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Hi, Calvin!! I must say this is my FAVORITE of yours that I've heard to date! Not, only that but I absolutely love everything about this song, no nits from me at all! Love the music, lyrics, your vocal... it's just perfect!! This is one AWESOME song!!! Just Super! --Jen
The dictionary is the only place where success comes before work.--Mark Twain
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Hi Calvin,
This is charming! Cool hook...it sings smoothly and I like all the visuals you portray in the lyric. Every word counts and the melody moves along at a nice, happy pace!
Enjoyed it!
Kristi
A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write, if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be, he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist
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Hello Alan, Good to see you & THANKS for listening & being so kind. I appreciate your comments. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Hello Jen, You sure know how to make my day. *T H A N K Y O U V E R Y M U C H* I'm smiling at your reply. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Hi Kristi, I basically try to enjoy the song and hope it turns out ok. Thanks for your kind words. CHARMING ! Thanks, my music has been called a lot worse than that :-) Have a good weekend. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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