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new one....thanks glyn

There Was A Party Going On

Well I came across this guy
while out dancing the other night
the way he was acting he wasn't a bit shy
on the dance floor his moves were outta sight

He said his name was Nick
should have known he wasn't Santa
said he was leaving pretty quick
had a hot truck full of young chicks headed to Montana

We talked for a while, man I loved his sweet smile
before I knew it, I was crawling up into that rig
we laughed and sang songs on for a couple of miles
I got to like this guy, he said girl, lets have some fun

He pulled off to the side, put his flashers on
Told me to follow him on round to the back
he opened that back door, I couldn't believe my eyes

There was a party going on, like i've never seen
I saw ho's, hobo's, a man with a million moles
some white trailer trash, or that's what I was told
there was a man with 3 legs and a blind bootlegger
passing out all kinds of beer
from the looks of things I felt it was best
for me to get the hell outta here

Bout that time the laws pulled up
took us all down to the jail
I told the judge I was innocent, he said on honey hell
from the looks of these pictures, you was the bell of the ball

There was a party going on, like i've never seen
I saw ho's, hobo's, a man with a million moles
some white trailer trash, or that's what I was told
there was a man with 3 legs and a blind boot legger
passing out all kinds of beer
from the looks of things I felt it was best
for me toget the hell outta here

Yeah, there was a party going on

copyright2011glyndaduncan/BMI

This is funny Glynda. It doesn't look like all the ideas are finished yet but I'm sure some more editing will clear it up. I thought the verse was leading me around the back to a party of chickens and was suprized not to find chickens doing swan dives and such. The picture line seems to come out of nowhere too.

You know, fun songs can go way outside the lines of normal structure. in some lyrics, the thought required to build the story takes more time to develope and we just need to insert more lines to get there.

Like what you have tho' it's a great start.

Tom

Tom,

Thanks,yeah this is one of those quick thoughts 5 minutes ones, came to my mind this morning and worked it way out, wanted to get it down before I forgot...and yes, it still needs alot of work...hey, that would be funny for the chickens to have been partying...


glyn