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http://youtu.be/jFpbjiB8IGAYou promised me we'd always be, together in love eternally......... You turned me on but then you turned on me, so now I've set you free....
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Straight out of my heart I've ripped you free like a thorn, to stem that flow of pain from our love that was torn, there's no band-aid that'll cover, wounds left by parting lovers, the only cure's to find another come morn......
It's pointless to pursue bad love, when the finish line awaits trying to catch failed dreams in a useless chase, I will only lose that race.
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It's best to turn and walk away, and hold my head up high, when there is nothing left to say, and that's the reason why....
Chorus-
Straight out of my heart I've ripped you free like a thorn, to stem that flow of pain from our love that was torn, there's no band-aid that'll cover, wounds left by parting lovers, the only cure's to find another come morn......
I hope you'll blossom somewhere else, I've seen you at your best, but at your worst you brought this time to shed what I possessed....
Chorus-
Straight out of my heart I've ripped you free like a thorn, to stem that flow of pain from our love that was torn, there's no band-aid that'll cover, wounds left by parting lovers, the only cure's to find another come morn......
ArtWhimsically Yours Studio MFB III Productions
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Very dark and beautiful lyrics! I'd lose the reverb on the recording though I couldn't make out the words!
Would love to hear it in song form!
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hey Thanks Dave, I have added some guitar to this as a backing, still needs some more work but it will give me a place to start at later....thanks for the listen and comments~~MFB III
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HEY MFB, This is my new favorite of yours! What a wonderful lyric, great song! It's so relatable, universal, I love everything about it! Dottie
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Got a cool 50s early 60s vibe on this, good lyric has a nice spin on the heartbreak theme, enjoyed it a lot,
Tony.
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What a great lyric, you have hit on something with this one, it has many lives to it.
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hey Dottie, Tony And Tam.....Thanks for sending me comments straight out of your hearts, they are appreciated a lot. I'm still playing with this one, it needs some harmony...Thanks for the visit.~~~MFB III
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Very nice song here,though sad. I especially like the lyrics-
I hope you'll blossom somewhere else, I've seen you at your best, but at your worst you brought this time to shed what I possessed....
Nice job!
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Jen thanks for your kind words, and that is the most telling verse in the song....~~MFB III
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