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This is for soft rock
Touch Me Now ©Copyright 6 / 28 /2010 Slim Cahill
(pre-Chorus)A perfect evening as the night falls a special feeling your heart calls do you feel this way.. do you.. do you..
(Chorus)touch me now touch my heart touch my soul oh touch me now before the moment goes
(V1)your eyes sparkle deep inside your lips glisten in the night touch me now while the time is right touch me now touch me..... tonight.. Ooooooooh do you feel this way..
(Instrumental)
(V2)so warm and tender dont wanta lose Ooooh dont wanta lose this feeling.. Oooh so love sick ..healing..... do you do you do you feel this way..
(Chorus)touch me now touch my heart touch my soul oh touch me now before the moment goes
(V3)a perfect evening as the night fades a special feeling i would never trade do you, oh do you feel this way.. do you.. do you..
(Chrorus2)Ooooooooh do you feel this way touch me now touch my heart touch my soul... ......Ooooh I love your touch Love your touch love your touch touch me. now..........
Last edited by Slim Cahill; 03/13/11 10:08 PM.
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Actually works as is IMO. I could see the "singer" very well and that is a good thing. (Martha Steward) The only "nit" that stands out is after you have described the "singers" situation and what he/she wants I do not think you need to go over it again and again. Maybe build on the emotions set up in the chorus and first verse and explore how else the "singer" could feel. Get a hold of the other senses that would make this even more exciting then it is. Just an opinion. Douglas
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Actually works as is IMO. I could see the "singer" very well and that is a good thing. (Martha Steward) The only "nit" that stands out is after you have described the "singers" situation and what he/she wants I do not think you need to go over it again and again. Maybe build on the emotions set up in the chorus and first verse and explore how else the "singer" could feel. Get a hold of the other senses that would make this even more exciting then it is. Just an opinion. Douglas Thanks Doug, Good idea! I'll try that and see what happens.
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