You Love It When I Talk Wordy

You Love It When I Talk Wordy #86430 09/06/02 10:45 PM
Joined: May 2001 Posts: 382 Victoria,British Columbia,Cana... B beancounter OP Serious Contributor
OP beancounter Serious Contributor B Joined: May 2001 Posts: 382 Victoria,British Columbia,Cana...	You Love It When I Talk Wordy (c) 2002 by Bill Draper v1 AAA... Come on in the living room Its been such a long day Sit down there on the couch Now just rest there...Stay! Til I get you a cool drink Put your feet up for awhile I'll be right back now honey You just hold that smile Chorus oo you so big and strong oo you so handsome and sturdy And I just know,I just know You love it when I talk wordy! v2 Now here I am back again baby That tie of yours looks so tight Lets loosen up a bit sugar Just relax now thats alright Now isn't that better honey Lets undo a few those buttons And let my little fingers sooth Where the collars been cuttin' Chorus oo you so big and strong oo you so handsome and sturdy And I just know,I just know You love it when I talk wordy! v3 Let's pull out that shirt-tail Here I'll loosen your belt Aaa come on now honey Ain't this the best you felt Since all day at the office Tied up on the phone Now its my turn to tie A few silky knots of my own Chorus oo you so big and strong oo you so handsome and sturdy And I just know,I just know You love it when I talk wordy!

Re: You Love It When I Talk Wordy #86431 09/07/02 03:28 AM
Joined: Apr 2001 Posts: 8,574 Nashville Tennessee Mike Dunbar JPF Mentor
Mike Dunbar JPF Mentor Joined: Apr 2001 Posts: 8,574 Nashville Tennessee	Good ideas, I like it. It's real descriptive, and it's got a cool "tone" to it, but I expected just a little more from the hook. I thought you'd go in the direction of: many sophisticated, multi-syllabled words turn me on...where you're saying something like, "darling, your epidermal charm and your optical disarm..." etc. Anyway, there's a lot there that I like. You've got to know your limitations. I don't know what your limitations are. I found out what mine were when I was twelve. I found out that there weren't too many limitations, if I did it my way. -Johnny Cash It's only music. -niteshift Mike Dunbar Music

Re: You Love It When I Talk Wordy #86432 09/07/02 06:52 AM
Joined: Aug 2002 Posts: 248 India P Pramod Ninan Serious Contributor
Pramod Ninan Serious Contributor P Joined: Aug 2002 Posts: 248 India	Hi Bill, Well, i just thought i'd ask something. Your chorus does seem to be quite disjoint from the verses, doesn't it? I mean, they seem to belong to different songs altogether. Or maybe that's the way you intended it? I'm saying this because the verses deal with actions alone, no words spoken, and then the chorus talks about being "wordy"....You might want to look into this, huh? But the poetry's fine, otherwise... C ya, Pramod I used to have an open mind, but my brains just kept falling out...

Re: You Love It When I Talk Wordy #86433 09/07/02 11:14 AM
Joined: Sep 2001 Posts: 10,330 Anaheim, CA, USA Jean Bullock Top 10 Poster
Jean Bullock Top 10 Poster Joined: Sep 2001 Posts: 10,330 Anaheim, CA, USA	LOL, Bill. This is cute as can be. You could go two different ways with this. Mike had a good suggestion with the big words , and Pramod brought up a good point. You could change wordy to something like flirty. If you wanted to go in that direction. Either would work. JeanB Please visit my facebook EZ3D PopUps for free papercraft templates. Great for beginners of all ages. Favorite Sites: http://facebook.com/EZ3DPopUps http://ez3dpopups.blogspot.com/ http://harrietschock.com http://jpfolks.com http://phillipmartin.com

Re: You Love It When I Talk Wordy #86434 09/08/02 02:37 AM
Joined: May 2001 Posts: 382 Victoria,British Columbia,Cana... B beancounter OP Serious Contributor
OP beancounter Serious Contributor B Joined: May 2001 Posts: 382 Victoria,British Columbia,Cana...	Hi Mike, Thanks for the nice comments. I know what you mean...I say wordy,thats what its gotta be....so I think I will drop that title and think of something that fits the existing verses better. Thanks again for the encouraging words. Bean

Re: You Love It When I Talk Wordy #86435 09/08/02 02:41 AM
Joined: May 2001 Posts: 382 Victoria,British Columbia,Cana... B beancounter OP Serious Contributor
OP beancounter Serious Contributor B Joined: May 2001 Posts: 382 Victoria,British Columbia,Cana...	Hi Pramod, You got it right on. I will change the chorus and title. THanks for reading and the good insight into this. India! wow...welcome! Bean

Re: You Love It When I Talk Wordy #86436 09/08/02 02:45 AM
Joined: May 2001 Posts: 382 Victoria,British Columbia,Cana... B beancounter OP Serious Contributor
OP beancounter Serious Contributor B Joined: May 2001 Posts: 382 Victoria,British Columbia,Cana...	Hi JeanB Awww thanks for saying that. Nice summary of my options too and you so clever...`flirty'...what a neat little word ... Thanks Jean. Bill

Re: You Love It When I Talk Wordy #86437 09/09/02 02:00 PM
Joined: Aug 2002 Posts: 105 Glendale, Arizona, USA DavidVanKleeck Serious Contributor
DavidVanKleeck Serious Contributor Joined: Aug 2002 Posts: 105 Glendale, Arizona, USA	Quote <font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by beancounter: You Love It When I Talk Wordy (c) 2002 by Bill Draper v1 AAA... Come on in the living room Its been such a long day Sit down there on the couch Now just rest there...Stay! Til I get you a cool drink Put your feet up for awhile I'll be right back now honey You just hold that smile Chorus oo you so big and strong oo you so handsome and sturdy And I just know,I just know You love it when I talk wordy! v2 Now here I am back again baby That tie of yours looks so tight Lets loosen up a bit sugar Just relax now thats alright Now isn't that better honey Lets undo a few those buttons And let my little fingers sooth Where the collars been cuttin' Chorus oo you so big and strong oo you so handsome and sturdy And I just know,I just know You love it when I talk wordy! v3 Let's pull out that shirt-tail Here I'll loosen your belt Aaa come on now honey Ain't this the best you felt Since all day at the office Tied up on the phone Now its my turn to tie A few silky knots of my own Chorus oo you so big and strong oo you so handsome and sturdy And I just know,I just know You love it when I talk wordy! </font> Greetings: Overall I loved it. Some basic changes have already been brought up, so I won't recover them. I do have a couple things I would like to suggest, if I may. CURRENT Verse 1, line 4 "Now just rest there...Stay!" SUGGESTED V1 L4 "Now just let your mind stray" However, if you're going for a more "forcefully willed woman" talking to this man of hers, home after a long days work (which seems indicated by the line towards the end of the song about tieing a few silky knots), the idea JeanB came up with about talking "flirty", would fit right in with just a slight overhaul of the lyrics in the verses being bent towards innuendo and double entendre supporting that theme. ------------------ David Van Kleeck davidvankleeck@vankleeck.com http://www.soundclick.com/bands/crosstown.htm Respectfully David Van Kleeck, CrossTown Band Dave@crosstown-band.com Official CrossTown Band Site CrossTown Band-YouTube LBW

Re: You Love It When I Talk Wordy #86438 09/10/02 12:55 AM
Joined: May 2001 Posts: 382 Victoria,British Columbia,Cana... B beancounter OP Serious Contributor
OP beancounter Serious Contributor B Joined: May 2001 Posts: 382 Victoria,British Columbia,Cana...	Hi David, Thanks for that nice critique and the compliments. Thats a good analysis for sure. Good suggestion on the `Stay' line...that is a command for sure and establishes a certain tone I had not previously noticed. Thanks for drawing my attention to that. This gives me great encouragement to work a little more on this and then maybe get some music for it. Cheers Bill

Re: You Love It When I Talk Wordy #86439 09/10/02 03:05 PM
Joined: Jan 2001 Posts: 2,125 Lorain, Ohio, USA I Idamarie Naelitz (D) Top 100 Poster
Idamarie Naelitz (D) Top 100 Poster I Joined: Jan 2001 Posts: 2,125 Lorain, Ohio, USA	Hi Bill, I stopped by to second Mike's idea about substituting some really big words in there to go along with that terrific hook! Idamarie

Re: You Love It When I Talk Wordy #86440 09/10/02 05:32 PM
Joined: Aug 2001 Posts: 70 ohio D debdeb Serious Contributor
debdeb Serious Contributor D Joined: Aug 2001 Posts: 70 ohio	Hi.. I love this.. it is SOOO Sexxxy!! Fun and unique too!! Think I saw this on ********* ??? A fun to read, engaging lyric Good Luck, deb

Re: You Love It When I Talk Wordy #86441 09/13/02 04:50 PM
Joined: May 2001 Posts: 382 Victoria,British Columbia,Cana... B beancounter OP Serious Contributor
OP beancounter Serious Contributor B Joined: May 2001 Posts: 382 Victoria,British Columbia,Cana...	Hi Idamarie and debdeb I thought of the title first. The text of the song is the `wordy' and is meant to be teasing. She is talking to him the whole time...the text of the verses. You like the hook Ida, and debdeb thinks the text is sexy...why wouldn't it work with a sexy female singing voice ? Thanks for posting Ida and debdeb and all! Bill

Re: You Love It When I Talk Wordy #86442 09/14/02 05:32 PM
Joined: Sep 2002 Posts: 53 New Hampshire, USA L lyric_lady Serious Contributor
lyric_lady Serious Contributor L Joined: Sep 2002 Posts: 53 New Hampshire, USA	"Sit down there on the couch Now just rest there...Stay!" Have you considered using the word 'dear' instead of "there" again in the second line? Just an idea :-) Lynn

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