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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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I'm looking for a female vocalist for this. I have a lead sheet for the song and a Band in a box file if anyone wants to take it on. The music was done by a friend in Florida and Im just dying to hear the finished song, the melody just won't leave me alone. It's a melancholic country tragedy (for want of a better word) Gary.
"Unchanged Autumn"
Last year you said the same things that you're saying to me now, next year it will be better... different somehow. To me it looks the same, not much to shout about... The car's still in the garage the engine's hanging out.
chorus And it's still the same old story that I face most every night... you drink up all your weekly pay then come home for a fight. but last years broken promises, they lay upon the ground and another unchanged autumn rolls around.
The tree out in the garden that you planted there for me, has died along with any hope of love for you and me. You promised me last summer next year would be the best, but the Autumn leaves are falling now this year, like all the rest.
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bridge Promises lie broken in each corner of my house. Ragged dreams are haunting me cast tentacles of doubt. but unchanged Autumns come and go like waves upon the beach, arriving on the crest of hope then fading out of reach.
chorus
Copyright Gary Parr & L. Gilkey 2010 all rights reserved.[u][/u]
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I really like this lyric,
It's very well written.
Geneva
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Hey Gary,
If I could sing I would do it in a heartbeat! I love this:)
Dottie
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Gary UK--
This is an eye catcher for sure--will watch for the musical post--
Write ON--
Mackie
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Gary,
That my friend is a strong lyric. I really like V2, chorus and bridge (really like the bridge). V1 is good but the second half of the verse fell just a little bit "flat" for me. Don't get me wrong.... it works just think that one part could be better.
Here's an idea for you to KOS:
To me it FEELS the same So much I want to shout But what good would it do I've got you figured out
or something to that effect.......
Looking forward to hearing the music on this one.
Mark
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Thanks everyone.
Like I said, all that is missing from this is a female vocal!!! If I get chance Ill try to convert the midi file to an mp3 and post the 'instrumental' version.
Gary
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